When My Time Has Run Out
My own checklist of questions65 total reviews
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
This is quite wonderful. You've done an exceptional job with this 12 syllable line poem. It flows along musically and has a sing-song quality about it.
Flawless meter and perfect rhymes.
Such an enjoyable read and congratulations on your win.
Luv&stuff
Katiemaedead
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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This is quite wonderful. You've done an exceptional job with this 12 syllable line poem. It flows along musically and has a sing-song quality about it.
Flawless meter and perfect rhymes.
Such an enjoyable read and congratulations on your win.
Luv&stuff
Katiemaedead
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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I sure appreciate your very kind comments for my Questions poem.
Thank you so very much, Katie. It seemed pretty easy when I just thought about what I ask when I go to pray. Thanks again!
Comment from JT traveller
I don't think anyone of us knows where we'll be when our time runs out.
People are easily offended. I really enjoyed your poem as it made me think. I have done as much as I can to contribute to this world. I will not sacrifice my own personal well being anymore for the benefit of others. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Jacqueline
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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I don't think anyone of us knows where we'll be when our time runs out.
People are easily offended. I really enjoyed your poem as it made me think. I have done as much as I can to contribute to this world. I will not sacrifice my own personal well being anymore for the benefit of others. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Jacqueline
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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Jacquelyn, I sure appreciate your very kind comments for my questions poem. Thank you so very much, my friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Wendy G
It's a beautiful poem, both thoughtful and thought-provoking, and it expresses many of our human insecurities and doubts. And yet we are very fortunate to be able to say we are saved by His grace alone. All our good deeds are the result of our salvation, not the reason for it. "By grace you are saved through faith; it is the gift of God, not of works, lest anyone should boast", so we can trust Jesus to have forgiven us and made us clean. So liberating. " Do I fully accept what He did on the cross?" you ask. Yes. Thank you, Jesus.
Wendy
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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It's a beautiful poem, both thoughtful and thought-provoking, and it expresses many of our human insecurities and doubts. And yet we are very fortunate to be able to say we are saved by His grace alone. All our good deeds are the result of our salvation, not the reason for it. "By grace you are saved through faith; it is the gift of God, not of works, lest anyone should boast", so we can trust Jesus to have forgiven us and made us clean. So liberating. " Do I fully accept what He did on the cross?" you ask. Yes. Thank you, Jesus.
Wendy
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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Me too, Wendy. Actually this is my checklist for myself to make sure I am fully following what God expects from me. And do I fail, oh yes, I come short. But I do keep trying. I know we can not make it to Heaven by anything we do, but when I ask myself if fully accept what He did on the cross, then I know the rest falls into place.
Thank you for your kind words for my poem, and even tho I do the check list, when I start thinking I have it all under control. Then I realized I am using way too many I s. That is when I know I need another check up. God Bless, and thanks, my sweet friend.
Comment from Carol Clark2
I'm not sure how I missed this, but it's beautiful. A great listing of things we'd all like to achieve in this lifetime. I think you can probably check these off your list, from what I know of you. Congratulations on winning the contest. Well done! Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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I'm not sure how I missed this, but it's beautiful. A great listing of things we'd all like to achieve in this lifetime. I think you can probably check these off your list, from what I know of you. Congratulations on winning the contest. Well done! Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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Oh, Carol, you are so sweet. Thank you for your kind words for my poem, as well as the gracious gift of six stars. This is pretty much my checklist of what I do when I start thinking I have it all under control. Then I realized I am using way too many I s. That is when I know I need another check up.
Thanks for the congrats too!
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That's a great checklist, Debi. And your win is well deserved.
Comment from lancellot
This is a very well-made poem. It is positive and engaging. It made me think as I was reading each stanza. I like the depth involved, and it reflects wanting to make a positive impact during one's life. Given FanStory's demographics this will be very appealing. I can see why you earned a victory. Well done and well thought out.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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This is a very well-made poem. It is positive and engaging. It made me think as I was reading each stanza. I like the depth involved, and it reflects wanting to make a positive impact during one's life. Given FanStory's demographics this will be very appealing. I can see why you earned a victory. Well done and well thought out.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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Hi Lance, I thank you so very much for the awesome review and the kind comments. I also appreciate the six stars and want you to know how much it is all appreciated.
Comment from lyenochka
Loved this, Debi! And I know you don't need more reviews but perhaps someone didn't see this for the contest and would be blessed to read it. You put everything into perspective to live as Jesus wants us to live. And we know our names are engraved not because of anything we did but because He already did it all so we respond in doing these things out of gratitude to Him.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Loved this, Debi! And I know you don't need more reviews but perhaps someone didn't see this for the contest and would be blessed to read it. You put everything into perspective to live as Jesus wants us to live. And we know our names are engraved not because of anything we did but because He already did it all so we respond in doing these things out of gratitude to Him.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Thank you. I hope you know why this one is so special to me now. I just saw what you did. That is so kind of you. Thank you so much. Maybe I will promote it again then, as I have been told it is some of my best work. After all I did have the best inspiration in the world. A Christian friend who has been there for me spiritually and in many other ways so many times. There is no harm in doing it again, and most of the reviewers are saying that they have been so blessed by reading. That alone is good enough reason to me.
And that is what I meant it to do. Ok, I will and thank so much for what you did. Not to mention, did you notice that you were my 50th review. How cool is that? Only you are worth more to me than your weight in gold.
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You're sweeter than words can say!
Oh, and I don't weigh much - by the way! 😂💖💖
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Lol, then I will change that to my weight in gold. Hahaha!
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😂💞💖I know what you mean - just joking with ya.
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I knew that, but this way you're work a lot more. 🤎 lol
Comment from T.A. Walk
This is a wonderful piece, ma'am. Thank you for sharing.
I was very moved by your words. The rhythm and flow was captivating, too.
I think I may be inspired to try this prompt style choice!
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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This is a wonderful piece, ma'am. Thank you for sharing.
I was very moved by your words. The rhythm and flow was captivating, too.
I think I may be inspired to try this prompt style choice!
Comment Written 15-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Thomas, you are so incredibly kind and I thank you so very much.
Thank you for your kind words for my poem. It is pretty much my checklist of what I do when I start thinking I have it all under control. Then I realized I am using way too many I s. That is when I know I need another check up.
Comment from jaded831
The challenge of this contest was a difficult task, you did a wonderful job in meeting the criteria. I like the way your poem makes the reader think. I don't like the fact that I fall short of some of the good thing's mentioned. Like being more forgiving.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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The challenge of this contest was a difficult task, you did a wonderful job in meeting the criteria. I like the way your poem makes the reader think. I don't like the fact that I fall short of some of the good thing's mentioned. Like being more forgiving.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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You are always so incredibly sweet!
Thank you for your kind words for my poem, as well as the gracious gift of six stars. This is pretty much my checklist of what I do when I start thinking I have it all under control. Then I realized I am using way too many I s. That is when I know I need another check up.
Comment from crjanak
A beautifully written, profound poem with lovely imagery. The author clearly took her time here, choosing each word carefully and thoughtfully. The writing makes me think about my day/life, which is admirable.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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A beautifully written, profound poem with lovely imagery. The author clearly took her time here, choosing each word carefully and thoughtfully. The writing makes me think about my day/life, which is admirable.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Crjanak, you are so sweet and I thank you for your kind words for my poem. It is pretty much my checklist of what I do when I start thinking I have it all under control. Then I realized I am using way too many I s. at is when I know I need another check up. Thanks also for the gracious gift of six stars too.
Comment from Michele Harber
Wow, Debi, this is so powerful, and really makes the reader think. I doubt any of us could live up to all the expectations you've set for yourself but, at the same time, there's not one of us who can't try. I always try to be a good person, but reading this actually makes me want to be a better one.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Wow, Debi, this is so powerful, and really makes the reader think. I doubt any of us could live up to all the expectations you've set for yourself but, at the same time, there's not one of us who can't try. I always try to be a good person, but reading this actually makes me want to be a better one.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Hi there Michelle, you are always so sweet. Thank you for your kind words for my poem. It is pretty much my checklist of what I do when I start thinking I have it all under control. Then I realized I am using way too many I s. That is when I know I need another check up.
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You're very welcome, Debi. By the way, sometimes you do have to use "I." When you're sharing your thoughts, feelings and beliefs, it's hard not to do it in the first person.
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Oh yes, I agree. That kind of I, I am ok with. But when I start to say I think this way, so should you. I do this and I do that. Y'know what I mean? Then the I is wrong when we get caught up in ourselves. At least that is what I have seen. That is why I do have a hard time accepting praise, because I never want it to give me a false ego. I totally love giving instead. Doing the birthday poems is such a rewarding thing for me.
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I fully understand your point. However, you are one of the least self-aggrandizing people I've ever seen. Yes, we all need to guard against being too full of ourselves but, in your case, I really don't think that's an issue. I do hope you'll accept this compliment, as I'm one of those people who'd rather say nothing at all than lie to boost someone's ego. If I compliment you, it's because I truly believe you deserve it.
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And I accept and am so honored by your kindness. Thank you so very much.
Truthfully, Michelle, I hope you don't mind me telling you how I see you. I sense a gracious class act type of woman, poised and elegant in mannerism and goodness. As that of humble royalty, if you don't mind me saying.
And I mean that in the most honorable and kind way.
I don't sense that from many, but like you said, you would rather say nothing than to lie.
That my friend, is pure class!!
Gosh, I am thankful to call you a dear friend.
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Oh my goodness, Debi. I'm now blushing, but I accept your kind words very gratefully.
I don't quite consider myself poised and elegant (I'm as casual as they come), but I do try to be kind and gracious, and to see the best in people wherever I can. The best thing about being that type of person is that it allows me to attract lovely people such as you. If we lived near one another, I have no doubt you and I would be close, genuine, in-person friends. You're definitely the type of person I like to be around.
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Most definitely. 😘
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