Ghost
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Comment from Chuck Keller
I'm still with you, Lea.
Sometimes I wonder if you use one of those "voice recognition" things instead of typing.
Every chapter has a couple of words that should be changed but I always know what was meant to be there so I haven't said anything.
You already know I LOVE your work and I'm definitely not criticizing you.
Just wanted you to know I do notice those things.
That said, I'm happy you finally escaped the torture.
I'm with you until the end. Maybe even after that.
Someday I hope you're able to smile and have some peace and happiness.
Thanks again for allowing me to ride along this story with you
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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I'm still with you, Lea.
Sometimes I wonder if you use one of those "voice recognition" things instead of typing.
Every chapter has a couple of words that should be changed but I always know what was meant to be there so I haven't said anything.
You already know I LOVE your work and I'm definitely not criticizing you.
Just wanted you to know I do notice those things.
That said, I'm happy you finally escaped the torture.
I'm with you until the end. Maybe even after that.
Someday I hope you're able to smile and have some peace and happiness.
Thanks again for allowing me to ride along this story with you
Comment Written 12-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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I actually do sometimes use talk to text which I really shouldn't but I do financial statements as well. And sometimes I talk to my phone and crunch numbers at the same time. I'm so happy to have you along with me on this journey.
Yes look ghost will end soon in a couple three chapters but that's childhood. Sometimes illegal actions continued for many years. There will be another look following it will be called "Spectre". My life seemed destined to be full of mayhem and hard lessons. I'm older now and don't need to live like that and I know so much more than I should have known before I left home but that is the way of I'm much wiser. Now. Thank you, my friend for your kind comments hanging out. Offering me suggestions. I really appreciate it. Have a great night.!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You must have been terrified Lea and if you did return home at that point your Stepfather would have beaten you and you could have killed you. There must be so much hate in his heart. You are such a brave soul to have stood up against him, you a 16 year old girl and he a strong and powerful man. You showed such courage. I hope that you spilling all of this story and telling the truth of this situation will heal you Lea as it shames your Stepfather and your Mother and shows them who they really are. They can no longer hide behind the pretence and I hope all the neighbours read your story and give you the empathy you deserve.
Just one edit for this line Lea.
(So I let my light weight and speed carry (me) through but leaving behind hair and roots in his grip).
I was on holiday with my family this year and I made my Grandson cry. He was being naughty and I told him off. When he cried, I felt so guilty and ashamed of myself, me being a grown woman and him being a little boy. Even after he cried he still found it in his heart to hug me. Children are so innocent. If only your Stepfather had shown some kindness toward you.
Another great chapter Lea, love Dolly x x x
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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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You must have been terrified Lea and if you did return home at that point your Stepfather would have beaten you and you could have killed you. There must be so much hate in his heart. You are such a brave soul to have stood up against him, you a 16 year old girl and he a strong and powerful man. You showed such courage. I hope that you spilling all of this story and telling the truth of this situation will heal you Lea as it shames your Stepfather and your Mother and shows them who they really are. They can no longer hide behind the pretence and I hope all the neighbours read your story and give you the empathy you deserve.
Just one edit for this line Lea.
(So I let my light weight and speed carry (me) through but leaving behind hair and roots in his grip).
I was on holiday with my family this year and I made my Grandson cry. He was being naughty and I told him off. When he cried, I felt so guilty and ashamed of myself, me being a grown woman and him being a little boy. Even after he cried he still found it in his heart to hug me. Children are so innocent. If only your Stepfather had shown some kindness toward you.
Another great chapter Lea, love Dolly x x x
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Comment Written 12-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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Yes, we are humans. We do make mistakes and I've made them too. So long as we say it and we correct it and we don't repeat it. That is the way to say sorry it's an action word in my opinion. You have a heart and empathy. And inside and compassion that is why you felt bad. You're a human beand so many out there who feel nothing. And you gave what's such a wonderful review? And I thank you for your fine words and your kind comments. Always important and precious to me and I hope you're doing well thanks again have a great night!
Comment from JT traveller
I wish I had your rage and willpower as a teenager. I just took my punishment in silence like I was told it was meant to be. Did shed out with no complaints. If I hurt myself my mother would say, "Now that's just God's punishment for you being a bad person." To read your words are difficult at times, but healing. Jacqueline xx
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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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I wish I had your rage and willpower as a teenager. I just took my punishment in silence like I was told it was meant to be. Did shed out with no complaints. If I hurt myself my mother would say, "Now that's just God's punishment for you being a bad person." To read your words are difficult at times, but healing. Jacqueline xx
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Comment Written 11-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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I would like to line up all the shitty mothers in the world and just start popping them off. Honestly and all the abusers Out there oh yeah like to pop them off too. Thank you Jackie. I hope you're doing well and you're on your way on your trip and that your friend. You are worried about is better too great trip and hope to talk to you too. Thank you again!