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Comment from JSD
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We are all with you dear Lea. Sending thoughts and prayers across the sea from the UK. I just hope that writing is providing some well needed release and therapy for you. X

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
    Hi, John, thank you again for your kindness. Yes, it does help to write it out very much, so take some of the power away from it when it's said or read out loud. I appreciate you and all your kindness and your well wishes. Thank you my friend but have you with me!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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The hard hearted way you have been treated is so cruel and uncaring and it is hard for a child to understand what's happened and the need to survive has kicked in here. Where is the guilt and remorse in these two people who are meant to be parenting you? Your story is so very sad Lea, another fine chapter in the abuse you suffered as a child, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
    Thank you, my friend. It will end at some. There was much to learn there in the outside world that I was woefully unprepared for. Let's drive it to what brings us to necessity and necessity. Is the mother of invention so I thank God. He gave me two brain cells to put together. I appreciate you if I haven't told you 80 times already. I'll tell you another eighty thank you again i'm pleased you're along with me!
Comment from Chuck Keller
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You continue to brilliantly tell this tragic story.
Your strength is impressive.
It's hard to imagine, having gone through something so despicable, that you can find the strength to put it in words.
It's always a pleasure to see your name on a post.
I'm with you until the end.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
    That's so awesome of you to say. You make me smile with all your kind supportive comments. Really you do. I never expected This reaction I'm receiving so I didn't courageous me to keep going. And it helps too your comments help greatly thank you again!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Some calm after that painful and horrendous storm. Time to reflect here. You convey a sense of temporary peace, no longer the suffocating sensation of their presence, at least for a while. Your description of your injuries seems to affect every movement of your body but reinforces your determination to fight back. Pain can do that. Thanks for sharing, Lea. Willing you, here, to get away from that monster. Take care Debbie x

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 Comment Written 07-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
    Debbie I always appreciate you so very much! They wanted no interference from medical staff, police or social services. Social services is where my grandmother comes in and interavines and cuts off the process and redirect it to herself. That's why we spent so long without help. The fear factor that they gave us do this or that will happen and then of course, the two times prior trying to get help back fired on me. Therein lies the crux. Thank you, my friend. I'm so happy to see your review as always. I appreciate you very much!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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That is good. Sometimes you've want to write naturally and other times, it perfectly makes sense that you'd want to write about not wanting to write. These are private and deep feelings you are sharing. It's healthy to be honest, as you have been, and express how you feel as you write. Excellent writing and descriptions of what you remember and what you're feeling about writing this now. Good for you.

Have a good evening,

Alex :))

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 Comment Written 07-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
    Thank you Alex my friend i'm so happy to see your review! Your work is so very engaging, so your comments are especially important. Thanks, it can only help thank you again my friend. I appreciate you so very much!