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A promise kept.
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Comment from
Mia Twysted
The image enforces the picture the words create in the mind of the reader. It is very vivid writing that pulls the reader in hoping and praying for him to make it out alive.
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Comment Written 06-Nov-2023
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Daylily
I was raised in a military family and so am able to very much appreciate the sacrifices made in order to keep our nation free. This is well written and gives a strong account of battlefield reality. Best wishes in the contest!
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Comment Written 06-Nov-2023
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