Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this very well written piece of poetry in etheree style. You made me feel the excitement of heading to a new destination.! You have described the feeling very well.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2023

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Nicely written etheree, to form and with strong and relatable content.

We begin with the sounds, and from the outside that is truly memorable with the whistle and the noise.

Then inside and heading toward a new destination.

Wishing you great luck with the voters. :)

Gloria

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 Comment Written 04-Nov-2023

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Well done with this perfectly symmetrical etheree, you have done what I admire, you've created the words thst suit this very articulate and classically presented poem, good luck, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 04-Nov-2023