2023 Gypsy's Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 90 "~ Gusty Winds ~"x
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Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
This is as beautiful with your words as it is with your art.
Unfortunately before Halloween is over, this is what much of our land will look like. And here it is not as beautiful. Well it is, but not in thought of what it means as it makes for a very long winter.
In 1991, I was taking my little girl trick or treating and I had to use our four wheel drive vehicle as she had to fight the snow for each house I took her to. Not the safest driving but I went slow. Didn't have any choice, I guess. But it was her last year and I hated to see her miss. Anyway, by next morning we had 26 inches of snow on the ground.
So the gusty winds that swept over the winter garden waited a long time to turn over a new leaf. Let's hope that isn't the same this year.
Sorry for being so chatty. Just love your poetry and art, as it truly inspires me.
Love, Debi
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023
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This is as beautiful with your words as it is with your art.
Unfortunately before Halloween is over, this is what much of our land will look like. And here it is not as beautiful. Well it is, but not in thought of what it means as it makes for a very long winter.
In 1991, I was taking my little girl trick or treating and I had to use our four wheel drive vehicle as she had to fight the snow for each house I took her to. Not the safest driving but I went slow. Didn't have any choice, I guess. But it was her last year and I hated to see her miss. Anyway, by next morning we had 26 inches of snow on the ground.
So the gusty winds that swept over the winter garden waited a long time to turn over a new leaf. Let's hope that isn't the same this year.
Sorry for being so chatty. Just love your poetry and art, as it truly inspires me.
Love, Debi
Comment Written 29-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023
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No worries, I like your chatting. :)
Thank you for the exceptional six stars review.
Take care, my friend. I wish the best for you.
Gypsy Queen
"A friend is one who overlooks your broken fence and admires the flowers in your garden."-author unknown
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Awe, I love that quote!! 😘
I just love you so much too.
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi MariVal,
I can go gusty winds literally, or I can feel the winds gusting through the existence of a cold and not so nice period of a life... and the patience needed to fulfill the change to a more accommodating climate... waiting for that new leaf to turn over.
Oh, I do feel it!
First you, and then the leaf will turn.
As always my dear friend, your attention to your craft is exceptional.
Is that a Scotch Thistle?
With our thoughts we create...
divine timing.
Warmest regards,
James.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023
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Hi MariVal,
I can go gusty winds literally, or I can feel the winds gusting through the existence of a cold and not so nice period of a life... and the patience needed to fulfill the change to a more accommodating climate... waiting for that new leaf to turn over.
Oh, I do feel it!
First you, and then the leaf will turn.
As always my dear friend, your attention to your craft is exceptional.
Is that a Scotch Thistle?
With our thoughts we create...
divine timing.
Warmest regards,
James.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023
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Yes, that's a scotch thistle. I love it...looks like a star and the color is perfect for my poems palette.
Thank you, James, as always, I appreciate your insightful review and feedback very much. You are the best.
I hope you are well and happy
Marival
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I would die happy at the end of day, if I could see the sunset on my lover's eyes"- unknown
Comment from lyenochka
I love your wordplay at the end. Autumn is full of gusty winds and we see lots of leaves being turned all around but your poem gives us hope for the "new" leaves in the spring.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023
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I love your wordplay at the end. Autumn is full of gusty winds and we see lots of leaves being turned all around but your poem gives us hope for the "new" leaves in the spring.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023
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Thank you, big sister! I always appreciate your insightful reviews. I know you 'get it'.
Love
Marival
Comment from GWHARGIS
You made me shiver with this. I am dreading those gusty winter winds. Right here on the ocean there is a different kind of cold. It is damp and relentless. Though the view is nice. Liked the double meaning of turning a new leaf. Beautifully written. Gretchen
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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023
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You made me shiver with this. I am dreading those gusty winter winds. Right here on the ocean there is a different kind of cold. It is damp and relentless. Though the view is nice. Liked the double meaning of turning a new leaf. Beautifully written. Gretchen
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Comment Written 29-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Nicki Nance
This is a gorgeous haiku, so rich in imagery that it gave me a chill. Brilliant presentation. Thanks for the warm little hope at the end. A new leaf.
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This is a gorgeous haiku, so rich in imagery that it gave me a chill. Brilliant presentation. Thanks for the warm little hope at the end. A new leaf.
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Comment Written 29-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my haiku.
Gypsy hugs