2023 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from shelley kaye
ooh i like the imagery of seeding flower dreams on the edge of winter - nice!
good one-liner!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2023
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ooh i like the imagery of seeding flower dreams on the edge of winter - nice!
good one-liner!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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Comment Written 27-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading this one-line contest entry. You're a master of using only a few words to evoke an image or an emotion, and most of the time both in your readers. Thank you for that. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2023
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I enjoyed reading this one-line contest entry. You're a master of using only a few words to evoke an image or an emotion, and most of the time both in your readers. Thank you for that. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
Seasons are like stages of life. You see the future with endless possibilities, yet once there we make those predictable safe choices. At least the flower knows what's best. Great poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2023
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Seasons are like stages of life. You see the future with endless possibilities, yet once there we make those predictable safe choices. At least the flower knows what's best. Great poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 27-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much, Gretchen (*=*) Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, this is a very lovely and beautiful One Line Haiku you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words and very beautiful imagery. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2023
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Gypsy, this is a very lovely and beautiful One Line Haiku you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words and very beautiful imagery. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 26-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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You are so welcome my friend. love and blessings, Teri
Comment from aryr
Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, Gypsy. I loved the words because they showed that with winter approaching their was a surprise at the seeds of life. The picture was very special. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2023
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Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, Gypsy. I loved the words because they showed that with winter approaching their was a surprise at the seeds of life. The picture was very special. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
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Comment Written 26-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from lyenochka
Love your one line haiku. Winter feels like it's a time when everything is dead but it's also a time of incubation and seeds can dream of their future flowering state.
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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2023
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Love your one line haiku. Winter feels like it's a time when everything is dead but it's also a time of incubation and seeds can dream of their future flowering state.
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Comment Written 26-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2023
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Thank you, big sister. Love you.
Marival