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Biography/Supernatural

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Comment from LJbutterfly
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It is amazing how all the horrible details of your journey remain with you until today. At least, now you can sort everything out and extract meaning. You learned adult lessons as a young girl. You learned things can often be darkest just before dawn. You were fortunate that the forest gave you enough change that you could purchase hot chocolate and a donut. Now, a man has discovered you at the bus stop. What will that mean? Is he the "him" you referred to earlier? I'll wait and see.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
    And the mystery deepens. Luckily, the man was a kind bus driver. And the HIM that you're pretty well, hes one we're all familiar with. Thank you for reading. I'm happy that this is of interest to you and that you are along for the ride! I appreciate you!
Comment from Jim Wile
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You made it out of the woods at long last after a disorienting and painful journey. How you made it out with your sanity intact is a wonder, Lea. Now, hopefully, the kind man at the bus stop will recognize a girl in trouble and lend a hand to help her. It's not a situation a young teenage girl would normally want to be in--to have to trust to a male stranger--but you certainly needed rescue. I hope you were able to finally catch a break here and that this was the start of the way back to normalcy. - Jim

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
    I did have a semi sudo break. I did receive much more knowledge on the why. Yes I received that too. Thank you Jim. The rabbit hole goes very deep.
    Thank you for reading Jim. I still appreciate your reviews you have no idea. I may sound like a broken record but I appreciate them all of them especially when I get suggestions for correction. The Eagle Eye of the writer is always there as is yours. Thank you so much, have an awesome evening!
Comment from BethShelby
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I relieved your found your way our the wood and had a bit of nourishment, even though it isn't what you body really needs. Don't keep us in suspense too long. I want to find help and start to recover from your illness. It sound like belong in a hospital.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
    Thank you, Beth, I probably should have gone to one. But that's not what my grandmother wanted. She might seem the sweet little lady. But when I found out she was actually the reason. Thank you very much, glad to see you here. I hope you have a great night! Thanks again!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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How awful that you became ill and had no support Lea, I have no idea what will happen next, but of course you must have survived to tell your tale, another fine chapter, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
    Thank you so much, Dolly, and thank you for hanging in there with me. Your support means a lot on maybe it's broken record butt. It is the truth and I shall remind you ever so often I appreciate everything you have to say and all your insights too. Thank you again, enjoy your day night. Whatever it is in lovely old England!
Comment from royowen
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Wow, I know what that feeling is! Just putting one foot in front of another, the world in the form of a tattered jacket, that provides enough for some reality touch, almost like the milepost and sign to normal's ville to pops up every now and then. A kind voice, reality again...well done, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 24-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
    Thank you so much! I so appreciate you reading along with me offering your kind comments thank you!
    Yes, life has been a barrel of laughs. At the very least, not boring. Thank you again!
Comment from Chuck Keller
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WOW
Your post takes the reader along with you as you struggle to survive
Every limb, difficult breath and fight against giving up is painfully shared skillfully.
Thank you for the less dangerous trek through this adventure.

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 Comment Written 24-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
    Thank you so much, Chuck! i'm happy to see you're hanging there with me on this journey!
    I really do appreciate you reading and offering your kind comment and support! thank you very much. I hope you have an awesome evening!