Comment from royowen

Excellent

I'm sure we all have those days were we bump into visions of the past that seem to fit the ever shifting of kaleidoscopic view of unreality unfolding before, like what must be going on with the world around us. The girl who shoots her hand up in class, why is it always a girl? Beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2023

Thank you Roy. I?m pleased that you enjoyed it.

reply by royowen on 24-Oct-2023

Most welcome

Comment from eliz100

Excellent

This is an excellent chapter. I want to keep reading to see what happens. I do not see any need for improvement. Your descriptions of the storyteller are well done. Have a blessed day.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2023

Thank you. I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

I get your main character I don't know how I feel about meeting my ex, what feelings will bring back... will I run away? Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2023

Thank you. I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

This is a mysterious one. What is going on with Angela that she's so troubled by William? Your well expressed story with excellent dialogue, building character, paints a scene that hooks your reader in to want to know more. And William's a cool, enigmatic character, so no clue there. Thanks for sharing, Jacob. I look forward to reading more. Debbie

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 Comment Written 24-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2023

Thank you Debbie, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.