Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

Lol. Well I found it funny. I especially liked the misspelling of think. My fat fingers are constantly mistyping. I post from my phone so the keyboard is tiny. I always appreciate help unless they try to rewrite my story and turn it into theirs. Great piece. Gretchen

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023

Hi Gretchen, thanks for the awesome review and the kind comments. It was a fun poem to do, but actually harder to purposely make mistakes. Lol, thanks again, dear friend.

Comment from jaded831

Excellent

Your poem made me laugh before coffee, a difficult thing to do. You creatively stated writers block. Something we on Fanstory can relate too. The picture adds to the appeal of your words.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023

Jaded, thanks for the awesome review and the kind comments. It was a fun poem to do, but actually harder to purposely make mistakes. Lol, thanks again, dear friend.

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Well done. It is sometimes quite difficult to write such a poem with errors for the sake of humour. Autocorrect gets very upset as well. This fun piece bade me smile - and recognise your skill. Best wishes for your entry!
Wendy

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023

Hi Wendy, thanks for the awesome review and the kind comments. It was a fun poem to do, but actually harder to purposely make mistakes. Lol, thanks again, dear friend.

Comment from karenina

Excellent

Really? Someone saw the name of the contest and began offering editing suggestions!

Now that's funny!

This is adorable, meeting all contest guidelines and eliciting smiles along the way!

Karenina

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023

Hi there K. thanks for the awesome review and the kind comments. It was a fun poem to do, but actually harder to purposely make mistakes. Lol, thanks again, dear friend.

reply by karenina on 20-Oct-2023

Oh, I make errors all the time! I could have "consulted

LOL.

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is excellent work. You use descriptive words and colorful imagery that will draw in a readers. Many will relate to and enjoy this.

Best wishes,

Alexandra

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023

Hi Alex, thanks for the awesome review and the kind comments. It was a fun poem to do, but actually harder to purposely make mistakes. Lol, thanks again, dear friend.

Comment from Nina Sexton

Excellent

Haha. That's hysterical. I love the coupled artwork and chalkboard-like background feeling it gave. There's no denying you're a pro. Even with the intended mis-spelling and usage, you nailed it! Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023

Hi Nina, thanks for the awesome review and the kind comments. It was a fun poem to do, but actually harder to purposely make mistakes. Lol, thanks again, dear friend.

Comment from gramalot8

Excellent

Ha ha. Very cute take on what we as poets are always struggling with. I really loved your spelin masteaks! Ha ha. Great job and thanks for sharing this with us.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023

Hi there, thanks for the awesome review and the kind comments. It was a fun poem to do, but actually harder to purposely make mistakes. Lol, thanks again, dear friend.

Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

As a non-poet, I found this delightful and fun.
While done in humor, and the mistakes are intentional, it is a good reminder that poetry takes a considerable amount of dedication and talent.
Good luck in the contest
Mary

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023

Hi Mary, thanks for the awesome review and the kind comments. It was a fun poem to do, but actually harder to purposely make mistakes. Lol, thanks again, dear friend.

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

I understand yur problem. Mi muse gets lost from tyme to tyme.
This is a fun and funny response to the writing prompt.

Well done and good luck.
Janet

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023

Hi Janet, thanks for the awesome review and the kind comments. It was a fun poem to do, but actually harder to purposely make mistakes. Lol, thanks again, dear friend.

Comment from Michele Harber

Excellent

This is very cute, but I actually love that someone tried to help you correct your "mistakes." They may have misunderstood your point, but at least they had good intention. I enjoyed your humor (and actually read the earlier version as well, where your verse on rhyme didn't rhyme. This is a fun approach to the prompt, and I enjoyed your rhymes. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023

Thanks Michelle. Eleri, who started the contest thought there was a possibility that it could be disqualified so I thought I better correct that part, and that was the best response that would still sound like I didn't know what I was doing. Lol... I have been dq'd for less than that in the past and it really is disappointing, so I thought I better not take a chance.

Thanks for your very kind comments and as always you are so appreciated.

reply by Michele Harber on 17-Oct-2023

Thank you. I understand why you were worried, as they did want the poem to rhyme. I'd hope they'd have more of a sense of humor than that, but I certainly wouldn't bet the house on that. I liked it both ways, but don't blame you for playing it safe.