The Makeover
A WITSEC Dribble Flash45 total reviews
Comment from Mary Vigasin
I just love it!!! Great funny, brilliant and unexpected punch line. This should be a strong contender in the Dribble Flash Fiction.
Best wishes, John.
Mary
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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I just love it!!! Great funny, brilliant and unexpected punch line. This should be a strong contender in the Dribble Flash Fiction.
Best wishes, John.
Mary
Comment Written 18-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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Thank you, Mary. Your review was extremely positive.
Cheers,
John
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
LoL. I like the ending...it's funny. I'm all for lgtbq+ rights but I think this an extreme witness protection.
Well done. An excellent entry for the Dribble Flash Fiction contest.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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LoL. I like the ending...it's funny. I'm all for lgtbq+ rights but I think this an extreme witness protection.
Well done. An excellent entry for the Dribble Flash Fiction contest.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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It?s all fiction to get a laugh. Not poking fun at anyone. I hope I didn?t insult?
Thank you for reading and sharing.
John
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no, you didn't insult me :)
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Hahaha lmao! Excellent! This deserves a resounding six And if I had two sixes and could give them both I would!
Excellent work and very clever I hope you have an awesome evening!
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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Hahaha lmao! Excellent! This deserves a resounding six And if I had two sixes and could give them both I would!
Excellent work and very clever I hope you have an awesome evening!
Comment Written 17-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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Lea. You helped make my evening awesome with an exceptional review coupled with those six stars?
Wow! Thank you.
John
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Well deserved! I'm still laughing!
Comment from Spitfire
Super cool. From male to female as noted in the last line. Up until then, I was fooled. Thanks for the notes as the cap letters name give credence to the changes made as what the reader assumes is a woman.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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Super cool. From male to female as noted in the last line. Up until then, I was fooled. Thanks for the notes as the cap letters name give credence to the changes made as what the reader assumes is a woman.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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Wow. Thank you gif a great review of positivity.
That?s all supported by the six stars.
Cheers,
John
Comment from Wendyanne
I wasn't expecting that ending so this is definitely flash fiction! It's a drastic way to not be recognised by the mob!! This made me smile so that's good. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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I wasn't expecting that ending so this is definitely flash fiction! It's a drastic way to not be recognised by the mob!! This made me smile so that's good. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 17-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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Wendy. Thank you so much for your time.
John
Comment from BethShelby
I got a laugh out of this. I thought it was a woman getting a makeover but no. That is quite a make over and you'd need to be inclined to be a trans to be willing to go that route or else be desparate not to be recognized.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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I got a laugh out of this. I thought it was a woman getting a makeover but no. That is quite a make over and you'd need to be inclined to be a trans to be willing to go that route or else be desparate not to be recognized.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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Thank you Beth. You got it!
Cheers,
John
Comment from Bill Schott
This dribble, The Makeover, has the proper word count and suggests that those WPP people can do wonders when it comes to protecting people. Maybe they're too good.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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This dribble, The Makeover, has the proper word count and suggests that those WPP people can do wonders when it comes to protecting people. Maybe they're too good.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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Great review, Bill.
Thank you
John
Comment from Ulla
Hahahaha, Love it. So short with a great punch line. Just what is asked for in a Dribble flash story. Yeah, I bet he...hmm ...she looked great. All the best of luck, John. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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Hahahaha, Love it. So short with a great punch line. Just what is asked for in a Dribble flash story. Yeah, I bet he...hmm ...she looked great. All the best of luck, John. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 17-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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Thank you, Ulla for this great review.
John
Comment from JSD
I was baffled for a moment and thought we were in some trendy 'trans' writing. Then I read your note and all became clear. Very funny and clever. Well done and good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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I was baffled for a moment and thought we were in some trendy 'trans' writing. Then I read your note and all became clear. Very funny and clever. Well done and good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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Thank you, John.
Great review very much appreciated.
John
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Oh my!! Thank you for sharing this contest entry with. I couldn't help but laugh. What does WITSEC stand for? This is a new one for me. I enjoyed reading and wish you luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Oh my!! Thank you for sharing this contest entry with. I couldn't help but laugh. What does WITSEC stand for? This is a new one for me. I enjoyed reading and wish you luck with the contest.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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The United States Federal Witness Protection Program (WPP), also known as the Witness Security Program or WITSEC, is a witness protection program.
Thank you, Barbara for reading and sharing.
John