Comment from L. Kalere

Excellent

What a beautiful "gift" for your son ... he's very lucky to have someone as sensitive and expressive as you. It doesn't matter how old they are, we still have that strong connection. It must be so difficult to see your son hurting, and I feel for you (I also have an adult son).

I wish you both the very best for a speedy recovery.

Always, Linda

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from aryr

Excellent

This was a spectacular picture of mother and son, Gypsy. It took me back in memories. I understand that your son, John is at the hospital with the dreaded congestive heart failure. My prayers are with him as well as my circle of friends. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023

Thank you very much, Aryr, for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.

Gypsy hugs

reply by aryr on 10-Oct-2023

Most welcome, Gypsy.

Comment from Lea Tonin1

Excellent

Your poems are always so visually beautiful, stunning, really! You always maje such wonderful choices of pictures. Text and color choices makes this visually beautiful.
And then of course, there's your beautiful poem to that lovely boy.
Having said that I find your poem to be Free of grammar issue's conclusion sentence structure quite good and you've got a nice little piece of magic here. I hope you have a great evening!

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from gramalot8

Excellent

So sorry about your son's il. Prayers that he heals. I too have just one son ( but also 2 daughters) ... but he was my first born and we have a special bond that I treasure. Thanks for sharing this with us.

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023

I also have two daughters and one son.

Thank you very much for the excellent and kind review.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

The tender feelings of a mother come through as you speak of cuddling your grown son as you would when he was small. He will always be your son no matter his age. You will always love him.
May he soon regain his strength and be home.

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023

Thank you very much for the excellent and kind review.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Thank you for sharing about your son and I'm grateful for all our friends here who pray! I love how you show that our love for our children never stops growing and they fit right "in our hearts."

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023

Thank you, big sister. I am so grateful to you and fanstorian friends praying for Johnny. I sent him the poem and he said, "I'm not fine anymore". It was so sad.

love you,
marival

reply by lyenochka on 10-Oct-2023

Why did he say he's not fine anymore? Is he very private and doesn't want people to know about him?

reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023

All his life he has said " fine" when he is asked, "how are you?" I wrote a poem for him that mentioned that and he said he is not fine anymore. It made me so sad. I've been very emotional today. Searching the internet for information and some was discouraging. I've been crying all day. I texted him a little while ago and he said he is feeling better. Tomorrow the doctors are doing a procedure to check his arteries..for blockage. .I can't remember what's called.

Love you

reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023

He just told me what it is...."Hello! So I will do the angiogram procedure tomorrow morning or afternoon. I won?t have anything to eat or drink starting midnight. I?ll have a catheter in my neck and wrist"

reply by lyenochka on 10-Oct-2023

Oh how hard! That's so awful when you can't eat or drink because of a medical procedure! Thanks for letting me know so we'll pray for a successful and helpful angiogram to help the doctors clearly understand the situation! 💖💖🙏

reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023

Thank you, big sister!

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

My prayers are with you and your son, and his family. I know how concerned you are. I am positive God's healing hand is assisting the doctors. I will continue praying. Please keep up posted on how your son is doing.

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023

Thank you, Barbara, his wife has been updating us. He went for a little walk today and didn't get tired. He is in good spirits. He is going to have an angiogram to check for blockages. I appreciate you support and prayers.