A Talk With Your Inner-Geek
Not your most intelligent talk with yourself either38 total reviews
Comment from GWHARGIS
I'd rather be a geek mom than the cool mom. I thought this was a cute poem that shows the conversation and how perspective changes. I agree, learn to laugh and you can conquer the world. Great poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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I'd rather be a geek mom than the cool mom. I thought this was a cute poem that shows the conversation and how perspective changes. I agree, learn to laugh and you can conquer the world. Great poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 30-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Awe Gretchen, you make me feel so good. I am right there with you as long as I can laugh with my kids or anyone for that fact. But I am a softie about everything and that makes me a geek I guess. Thanks for your sweet comments, my dear friend,
Comment from Daylily
A very funny posting with the perfect picture selected to be included for the enjoyment of readers.
I have no doubt you caused a lot of Fanstorians to chuckle.
Way to go!
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A very funny posting with the perfect picture selected to be included for the enjoyment of readers.
I have no doubt you caused a lot of Fanstorians to chuckle.
Way to go!
Comment Written 30-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Oh thank you so very much for this very kind review and comments. You are so sweet, Daylily.
Comment from LJbutterfly
As we mature, we see things differently than we did at younger ages. And often we see the pros and cons of the same issue. To me, this is what your clever poem is stating. Your poem describes the picture perfectly. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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As we mature, we see things differently than we did at younger ages. And often we see the pros and cons of the same issue. To me, this is what your clever poem is stating. Your poem describes the picture perfectly. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Hi there Loraraine, I thank you so much for all your kind comments about this silly Senryu poem. I love laughing at myself, and I appreciate you laughing with me.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the senryu contest.. it's pretty funny.
I like the Concrete images easy to visualize. Cool presentation.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Excellent entry for the senryu contest.. it's pretty funny.
I like the Concrete images easy to visualize. Cool presentation.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 30-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Hi there Gypsy , I thank you so much for all your kind comments about this silly Senryu poem. I love laughing at myself, and I appreciate you laughing with me.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This senryu is witty and oh so true. Any one who does things like dying their hair or paint their skin to show loyalty is being idiotic. Deeds are more important.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great rest of the weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Hi
This senryu is witty and oh so true. Any one who does things like dying their hair or paint their skin to show loyalty is being idiotic. Deeds are more important.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great rest of the weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 30-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Hi there Joan, I thank you so much for all your kind comments about this silly Senryu poem. I love laughing at myself, and I appreciate you laughing with me.
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You are most kindly welcome. Laughter is great.
Joan
Comment from harmony13
The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line put
the poem all together! And, it made me laugh! I liked the title of this poem - because for some people inner child does not work! Thank you for the author's notes - food for thought! The artwork is awesome and compliments these words. Have a great weekend!....Maria
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line put
the poem all together! And, it made me laugh! I liked the title of this poem - because for some people inner child does not work! Thank you for the author's notes - food for thought! The artwork is awesome and compliments these words. Have a great weekend!....Maria
Comment Written 30-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Hi there Maria, I thank you so much for all your kind comments about this silly Senryu poem. I love laughing at myself, and I appreciate you laughing with me.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute and very well written Senyru you have penned for the writing prompt contest. You used very good descriptive words and great imagery to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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This is a very cute and very well written Senyru you have penned for the writing prompt contest. You used very good descriptive words and great imagery to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 30-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Hi there Teri, I thank you so much for all your kind comments about this silly Senryu poem. I love laughing at myself, and I appreciate you laughing with me.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellently written poem. I think creativity is never bad. Your presentation is very good, whether we'd want to wear that ourselves or not. You also use descriptive words and colorful imagery that draw in a reader.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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This is an excellently written poem. I think creativity is never bad. Your presentation is very good, whether we'd want to wear that ourselves or not. You also use descriptive words and colorful imagery that draw in a reader.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
Comment Written 30-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Hi there Alex, I thank you so much for all your kind comments about this silly Senryu poem. I love laughing at myself, and I appreciate you laughing with me.
Comment from Sally Law
I certainly can relate to this one, mystery poet. I look back at my permed hair and outrageous clothes and wonder what I was thinking. A fun poem in 5-7-5 senryu poetry.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally Law :))
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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I certainly can relate to this one, mystery poet. I look back at my permed hair and outrageous clothes and wonder what I was thinking. A fun poem in 5-7-5 senryu poetry.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 30-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Hi there Sally, I thank you so much for all your kind comments about this silly Senryu poem. I love laughing at myself, and I appreciate you laughing with me.
Comment from Lisasview
Very very funny... Love the photo choice... works quite well with you Senryu poem.
I wish you the very best of luck in the poem...
I really liked it.
Lisasview
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Very very funny... Love the photo choice... works quite well with you Senryu poem.
I wish you the very best of luck in the poem...
I really liked it.
Lisasview
Comment Written 30-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Hi there Lisa, I thank you so much for all your kind comments about this silly Senryu poem. I love laughing at myself, and I appreciate you laughing with me.
