Phone me a Memory
Many things trigger memories36 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Wow, I had to read it twice. You would think the title and picture would be really good clues! This was tender and thought-provoking. I enjoyed it quite a bit. Anything can offer up memories if we are so inclined. I enjoy your work. Karen
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023
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Wow, I had to read it twice. You would think the title and picture would be really good clues! This was tender and thought-provoking. I enjoyed it quite a bit. Anything can offer up memories if we are so inclined. I enjoy your work. Karen
Comment Written 20-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023
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Thanks for the review and I am most happy you enjoy my work. Lets see what the judges think. Keep on writing.
Cheers
Barry
Comment from Gloria ....
This is really good, as the theme of opening a phone directory draws up many memories from the memory bank.
This is original and relatable so I wish you much luck with the voters. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023
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This is really good, as the theme of opening a phone directory draws up many memories from the memory bank.
This is original and relatable so I wish you much luck with the voters. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 20-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023
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Gloria,
Thanks so much for your kind review. Glad you enjoyed it. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a lovely flash fiction. Sometimes we forget how powerful memory is. In this case just opening a phone directory populates a room with so many people that are wonderful memories. Very well written with no errors.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023
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This is a lovely flash fiction. Sometimes we forget how powerful memory is. In this case just opening a phone directory populates a room with so many people that are wonderful memories. Very well written with no errors.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023
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Carol,
Thanks so much for your review. Glad you enjoyed the story. Yes, memories are very powerful. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
Comment from damommy
Memories are so important to keep. We can revel in them over and over. What a clever way to show your memories by using a telephone diary. You made them all come alive. I thought for a moment they had entered to room.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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Memories are so important to keep. We can revel in them over and over. What a clever way to show your memories by using a telephone diary. You made them all come alive. I thought for a moment they had entered to room.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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Thanks for the review. Glad you enjoyed it. Yes, memories are important and I am always surprised when they just pop out from old books, photo albums etc. And of course, telephone diaries.
Take care.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
Comment from Sally Law
I can certainly relate to your flash and the memories that pop up at the oddest times. It could be food cooking, certain clothes, or a song on the radio, even a telephone diary. Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal :))
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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I can certainly relate to your flash and the memories that pop up at the oddest times. It could be food cooking, certain clothes, or a song on the radio, even a telephone diary. Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal :))
Comment Written 19-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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Thanks Sally for your review. Yes, there are many triggers around that get the memories flowing. It is quite surprising where they can spring from. Have a great day and thanks for the best wishes.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
Comment from John Ciarmello
Hi, Barry!
I sincerely enjoyed this read. Your reveal at the end was perfectly placed and didn't disappoint.
If I had to mention one thing to enhance the reveal further, it would be to omit: "but all good things must end."
It's just a thought! Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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Hi, Barry!
I sincerely enjoyed this read. Your reveal at the end was perfectly placed and didn't disappoint.
If I had to mention one thing to enhance the reveal further, it would be to omit: "but all good things must end."
It's just a thought! Best, JohnC
Comment Written 19-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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John,
Thanks for the review. Glad you enjoyed it. Also thanks for your suggestion. Yes perhaps I could have used other words but for now I will leave them where they are. Have a great day and take care.
Cheers
Barry
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
This is a well written flash story and a strong contest entry.
In a limited number of words you were able to not only tell a complete story but leave a lingering sentiment~
memories of loved ones ebb and flow without warning~ enjoy them.
Thank you for this offering and good luck in the contest!!
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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This is a well written flash story and a strong contest entry.
In a limited number of words you were able to not only tell a complete story but leave a lingering sentiment~
memories of loved ones ebb and flow without warning~ enjoy them.
Thank you for this offering and good luck in the contest!!
Comment Written 18-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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Thanks for the review. Glad you enjoyed it. Yes memories can flow so easily once triggered. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
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You're welcome!
Comment from JSD
I could see the ending coming, but no matter. It's a great piece, economically contained in so few words and reminding us of the power of memory as it works in our minds. Well done and good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
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I could see the ending coming, but no matter. It's a great piece, economically contained in so few words and reminding us of the power of memory as it works in our minds. Well done and good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
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Thanks so much for your review. Glad you enjoyed it.We will see how it goes. Take care and have a great day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment from Ricky1024
Very true memories are not controlled but are to be absorbed when the moments or Crystal clear.
And the pain is closer than near.
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
My Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents we're both Excellent and Exceptional, while Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
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Very true memories are not controlled but are to be absorbed when the moments or Crystal clear.
And the pain is closer than near.
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
My Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents we're both Excellent and Exceptional, while Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 18-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
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Ricky,
Thanks for this fine review. I must admit to having tears in my eyes when I typed this out. You take care and have a great day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment from Sanku
You made people from a telephone diary step into the real world .IT was an unexpected O'Henry ending and Very imaginative .I wish all the best for the contest .I feel it should win...
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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You made people from a telephone diary step into the real world .IT was an unexpected O'Henry ending and Very imaginative .I wish all the best for the contest .I feel it should win...
Comment Written 17-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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Thanks for your review . Glad you liked it. Lets see what happens in the contest but I am lifted by your confidence. Have a great day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
