2023 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Sizzling Sunrise's Color Bomb".
17 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There are so many joys on Mother earth and your ambient post reminds us of all the fine fragrances and colour we we can enjoy too, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023
There are so many joys on Mother earth and your ambient post reminds us of all the fine fragrances and colour we we can enjoy too, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from JSD
Beautiful, as usual, Gypsy. From the lovely title to the scents, to the colours, to the sounds. Even some tastes in there. All utterly gorgeous. Well done.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023
Beautiful, as usual, Gypsy. From the lovely title to the scents, to the colours, to the sounds. Even some tastes in there. All utterly gorgeous. Well done.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Peitho
I really like the picture you painted with your words. It was beautifully written and makes me want to go for a walk in the woods. Love the art work you chose! Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023
I really like the picture you painted with your words. It was beautifully written and makes me want to go for a walk in the woods. Love the art work you chose! Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 13-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from royowen
An excellent free verse Gypsy. And you have a wonderful array of sensual experiences that are magnified by the perfumes that heighten the sensation o a super job Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023
An excellent free verse Gypsy. And you have a wonderful array of sensual experiences that are magnified by the perfumes that heighten the sensation o a super job Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your exceptional review and kind words.
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Most welcome
Comment from lyenochka
Love the way you made the passions explode with color as the narrator brings the morning to life with the sounds of morning from the birds to the coffeemaker and the beautiful sunrise colors!
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023
Love the way you made the passions explode with color as the narrator brings the morning to life with the sounds of morning from the birds to the coffeemaker and the beautiful sunrise colors!
Comment Written 12-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much, big sister. I'm happy you like it. I was trying to use all the senses.
Love
Marival
Comment from Douglas Goff
You write so beautifully. It is truly amazing how you match up your wonderful words to the perfect pictures.
This is very good. Thank you,
Douglas
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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023
You write so beautifully. It is truly amazing how you match up your wonderful words to the perfect pictures.
This is very good. Thank you,
Douglas
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Comment Written 12-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023
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Douglas,
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your free verse - nice picture presentation of Mother Earth- good flow with many descriptive words - touch- wind -smells-hot sun rise- coffee pot- kind of like a dream? Good job AP
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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
I like your free verse - nice picture presentation of Mother Earth- good flow with many descriptive words - touch- wind -smells-hot sun rise- coffee pot- kind of like a dream? Good job AP
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Comment Written 12-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs