Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

I really like your poem- Excellent picture presentation with the exciting new look in bra's lol- your story is a good one with a surprise ending - made me laugh! Who knew she might be a vampire? She looked sweet and innocent in black! Haha Good Job AP

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

I am so excited you are writing these scary poems. I liked this one, because I thought it was just a girl trying to get a boy. I was only partly right. The fangs change everything. Great job. Keep em coming. Gretchen

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2023

I'm a big horror fan, but you know that. You have inspired me with your scary stories. (*<>*)

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Jumbo J

Excellent

Hi Gypsy Queen,
No way I'm spending the night with someone with fangs... and scary flicks, well, no thanks... but wait, popcorn and sticky treats... hmmmmm, what sticky treats are you speaking of?

Maybe I just come over in the light of day, stay a few hours before the sun goes down, hold sticky hands and who knows, maybe I do donate a drop or two of blood for friendship's sake. I always say... 'if it for a good cause'.

Thanks for the smile lady of the night.... hmmmm, now that sounds wrong, but you know what I mean, right? Fangs and all:)

Great presentation!

With our thoughts we create...
blood we can bank on.

Warm regards,
James.

"No man knows till he experiences it, what it is like to feel his own life-blood drawn away into the woman he loves."-Bram Stoker

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2023

Hehehe.... you are one my best friends so you must know I love horror... not gory slasher stuff...but zombies are great... "28 days." "Worl War Z" "Bram Stoker's Dracula" "Werewolf in London" .... so many more.... TV. The walking dead (earlier seasons) and the last of us.

I left the "sticky treats" open for interpretation but I must say whatever it may be is fun. If you decide to come.....I'll hold your hand. Hahaha I kept the poem "not too scary" but what I didn't say I used the presentation and let the reader imagine what's going on. It's always scarier in your mind. In the original
Dracula, Gothic novel by Bram Stoker in the late 1800s he used light and shadows to scare people and a lot was left for the imagination.

I'm glad I made you smile.

Thank you, James. It's always a pleasure.

Besitos y abrazos

Marival
Ps I love the quote.

reply by Jumbo J on 08-Sep-2023

I yes, I do know you enjoy your horror flicks and series... me too, much the same genre. I'm not into the gratuitous slash type movies... but I do love vampires, zombies, werewolves and such if it has a story and good theme. Hope your weekend is staring off on a good foot.

reply by the author on 08-Sep-2023

Yes, good so far. I glad we share the love of horror genre. May you have a wonderful weekend ... my friend

Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

Halloween is in full swing here. Do me a favor and read my old poem "5 cents a glass". It is all the way down at the bottom of my portfolio. That poor little story got neglected. I need another read for it. The second picture I am not terribly fond of, but everything else was top-notch as usual. Great poetry.
Karen

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 Comment Written 08-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2023

Thank you

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Scary stuff and I can imagine you and Dean watching those scary movies together even if you couldn't hold hands that have been covered by remnants of sticky treats!

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 Comment Written 08-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2023

Yes, Dean and I did watch scary movies, we both started a movie at the same time and shared our thoughts... it was fun. During the week he came over to visit, and we watched scary movies together in the same room. LoL I don't know if everybody knows this, but Dean was really funny. We laughed a lot.

Thank you for the review and kind words, big sister. May you have a wonderful weekend. (*=*)

love,

MariVal

reply by lyenochka on 08-Sep-2023

I can imagine he had a good sense of humor. He is missed. I'm so glad you got to know him that well! 💖