Coffee With Iris
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "Gift From the Past"Two opposites meet and connect.
24 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very lovely and happy, but bittersweet end also. You used great descriptive words and great dialogue. Thank you for sharing with us! love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2023
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This is a very lovely and happy, but bittersweet end also. You used great descriptive words and great dialogue. Thank you for sharing with us! love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 02-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Teri. I'm happy you liked this. Gretchen
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It was really great!!!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is a perfect ending, and I am positive that Iris does how much Jameson loves her. I can't imagine any difference. She did make a huge difference in his life. Thank you for sharing this beautiful story with us.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2023
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This is a perfect ending, and I am positive that Iris does how much Jameson loves her. I can't imagine any difference. She did make a huge difference in his life. Thank you for sharing this beautiful story with us.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Barbara. I'm so happy you liked this. Gretchen
Comment from John Ciarmello
Wow! I had to catch up again, Gretchen! Hahah!
What fabulous writing and storytelling are in this saga. Your ease has followed through so perfectly to the end, and I'm going to miss this one as well. I loved it! Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2023
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Wow! I had to catch up again, Gretchen! Hahah!
What fabulous writing and storytelling are in this saga. Your ease has followed through so perfectly to the end, and I'm going to miss this one as well. I loved it! Best, JohnC
Comment Written 02-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2023
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I have more of Miranda coming this weekend. I'm starting her sequel. Hope you'll join me for that. Thanks so much fir this kind review and the extra star. Gretchen
Comment from JSD
Wonderful. Another 6 for you as we end this one, a cumulative score. I have enjoyed the read so much, as you know, and it has ended rather beautifully. Thank you!
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2023
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Wonderful. Another 6 for you as we end this one, a cumulative score. I have enjoyed the read so much, as you know, and it has ended rather beautifully. Thank you!
Comment Written 02-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2023
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I'm so happy you liked this. I appreciate the kind words and the extra star. Gretchen
Comment from BethShelby
This is a great story. I'm sorry I didn't read it from the beginning, but I think I caught up with the important parts of it. I'm enjoying your other writing as well and I look forward to reading more.
Beth
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2023
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This is a great story. I'm sorry I didn't read it from the beginning, but I think I caught up with the important parts of it. I'm enjoying your other writing as well and I look forward to reading more.
Beth
Comment Written 02-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Beth. I'm happy you enjoyed this. Gretchen
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
The great thing about this story, Gretchen, it has never once lapsed into mawkish sentimentality. It has touched those emotional chords as skilfully as any writer could do and left the reader gratified and happy about its conclusion. Well done and thank you! Debbie
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2023
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The great thing about this story, Gretchen, it has never once lapsed into mawkish sentimentality. It has touched those emotional chords as skilfully as any writer could do and left the reader gratified and happy about its conclusion. Well done and thank you! Debbie
Comment Written 02-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Debbie. This review means so much. I'm so glad you liked it. Gretchen
Comment from royowen
Isn't that wonderful, I've heard of shooting stars crossings the skies as a sign that a loved one gives a sign that everything is fine, what a generous person. So it would be nice to hear from Jameson again, well done Gretchen, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2023
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Isn't that wonderful, I've heard of shooting stars crossings the skies as a sign that a loved one gives a sign that everything is fine, what a generous person. So it would be nice to hear from Jameson again, well done Gretchen, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Roy. That last paragraph took days. I had to end the novella with a connection or final word from Iris. The shooting star was it. Lol. Gretchen
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That was a great touch Gretchen
Comment from jmdg1954
Gretchen,
A wonderful ending to a calm, quiet story of true friendship. Jameson snd Iris were both thankful for the other coming into their life.
There wasn't a chapter written that would've turned me away. Every chapter had me wanting for more!
Cheers to a fine conclusion.
John
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2023
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Gretchen,
A wonderful ending to a calm, quiet story of true friendship. Jameson snd Iris were both thankful for the other coming into their life.
There wasn't a chapter written that would've turned me away. Every chapter had me wanting for more!
Cheers to a fine conclusion.
John
Comment Written 02-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2023
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Thanks so much, John. I'm happy you stayed until the finish. Gretchen
Comment from Sankey
What a lovely ending. I had hoped this would be how you would wind it up and so glad you did. I look forward to more of your stuff. You never disappoint. I will get to your other I have on Kindle, soon, as well.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2023
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What a lovely ending. I had hoped this would be how you would wind it up and so glad you did. I look forward to more of your stuff. You never disappoint. I will get to your other I have on Kindle, soon, as well.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2023
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Ok. Thank you for this. Let me know what you think about the others. Gretchen
Comment from Wendy G
Beautiful ending. But I didn't want it to end. I really enjoyed this story. You have such a direct, yet meaningful and powerful, writing style. I wish I had a six again for you, for your chapter is worth it, as is the whole story. Well done, congratulations.
Wendy
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2023
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Beautiful ending. But I didn't want it to end. I really enjoyed this story. You have such a direct, yet meaningful and powerful, writing style. I wish I had a six again for you, for your chapter is worth it, as is the whole story. Well done, congratulations.
Wendy
Comment Written 02-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2023
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Thanks so much. I'm really glad you liked it and stayed until the end. Gretchen