Fleshly Frenzy
The craving of carnal, copious, climactic commandment33 total reviews
Comment from Kate MacDonald
I truly enjoyed this brevity, it was undeniably frenzied, feverish and fabulous. Alliteration must be handled with a subtle touch and this was wonderful.
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I truly enjoyed this brevity, it was undeniably frenzied, feverish and fabulous. Alliteration must be handled with a subtle touch and this was wonderful.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2023
Comment from BermyBye50
Opal Rose
This is a excellent entry in the Free Verse Poetry Contest. It oozes intense passionate sexual sensuality from the start of your brilliant alliteration to the last word. The art work is perfectly matched to the verse.
All the best in the contest,
Eugene
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The craving of carnal, copious, climactic commandment
Fleshly Frenzy
by Opal Rose
Unfurling feverishly,
fluttering fervent fingers flourish,
forcefully fixating familiarly,
fulfilling her famished fantasies.
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Opal Rose
This is a excellent entry in the Free Verse Poetry Contest. It oozes intense passionate sexual sensuality from the start of your brilliant alliteration to the last word. The art work is perfectly matched to the verse.
All the best in the contest,
Eugene
Portfolio " Become A Fan
The craving of carnal, copious, climactic commandment
Fleshly Frenzy
by Opal Rose
Unfurling feverishly,
fluttering fervent fingers flourish,
forcefully fixating familiarly,
fulfilling her famished fantasies.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2023
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Wow! A wonderful use of alliteration to describe and celebrate the desires of the flesh. You strung your words together in a orderly, colorful manner and together they work really well as a free verse.
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Wow! A wonderful use of alliteration to describe and celebrate the desires of the flesh. You strung your words together in a orderly, colorful manner and together they work really well as a free verse.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2023
Comment from Thomas Bowling
You are a talented and creative poet. Your words do a great job of conveying your thoughts. the image you chose adds a visual aspect o the passion and fire expressed in your writing.
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You are a talented and creative poet. Your words do a great job of conveying your thoughts. the image you chose adds a visual aspect o the passion and fire expressed in your writing.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2023
Comment from Ulla
What a wonderful and colourful poem for the contest. Love and especially lust and passion has taken the front seat. Wonderful alliteration as well. I loved it. All the best of luck. Ulla:)))
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What a wonderful and colourful poem for the contest. Love and especially lust and passion has taken the front seat. Wonderful alliteration as well. I loved it. All the best of luck. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 02-Dec-2023
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Fabulous free verse poem, full of delicious aliteration, vivid pictures, full of love, desire and all told in a few short words. This is a really good poem for the contest, Opel, the picture is a fabulous compliment to the words. Very well done and good luck in the contest.:)) Sandra xxx
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Fabulous free verse poem, full of delicious aliteration, vivid pictures, full of love, desire and all told in a few short words. This is a really good poem for the contest, Opel, the picture is a fabulous compliment to the words. Very well done and good luck in the contest.:)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 02-Dec-2023
Comment from RaynaHarleenQuinns
A++++
That was beautiful words with such a very erotic image and this has to be one of my three favoirties. of all time. Please keep up the good work.
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A++++
That was beautiful words with such a very erotic image and this has to be one of my three favoirties. of all time. Please keep up the good work.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2023
Comment from Tom Horonzy
That is a lot of "F words streaming herein. How id you come to write this piece as you did. It also correlates with my "Tainted Thoughts" I wrote earlier this week. That's frightening.
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That is a lot of "F words streaming herein. How id you come to write this piece as you did. It also correlates with my "Tainted Thoughts" I wrote earlier this week. That's frightening.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2023
Comment from Terry Broxson
That is a whole lot of "F" words for one poem. Sorry, I just could not resist that rather tasteless attempt at some humor. But the words you choose and use in such a creative manner do show the intensity I think you want the poem to achieve. Well done. Terry.
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That is a whole lot of "F" words for one poem. Sorry, I just could not resist that rather tasteless attempt at some humor. But the words you choose and use in such a creative manner do show the intensity I think you want the poem to achieve. Well done. Terry.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2023
Comment from Jacob1395
This was really good, and your choice of words really made your poem flow well, and I was kept really engaged in your writing. You describe the scene so well. A excellent piece. I enjoyed reading it.
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This was really good, and your choice of words really made your poem flow well, and I was kept really engaged in your writing. You describe the scene so well. A excellent piece. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2023