One Man's Calling
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Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. I wondered about the Paladin character. I find it a bit of a distraction. You moved the story along nicely despite the distraction. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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This is another excellent chapter. I wondered about the Paladin character. I find it a bit of a distraction. You moved the story along nicely despite the distraction. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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My opinion only - intensity requires occasional distraction. (smiley face here) Also, it's a set up for a future appearance.
Thank you for the review.
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I will keep reading to find out.
Comment from Ben Colder
paladin, was not this a western series starring Richard Boon in the sixties?
I have not seen the name since then. I enjoyed your write. He was offered a nice reward. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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paladin, was not this a western series starring Richard Boon in the sixties?
I have not seen the name since then. I enjoyed your write. He was offered a nice reward. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Yes, it was. I thought the distraction would add color to the story. It's also a set up for a future appearance.
Thank you for the review.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
What, Ben is fighting? That's new, but i guess it's part of his calling. Why San Francisco? Is he starting a church there? Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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What, Ben is fighting? That's new, but i guess it's part of his calling. Why San Francisco? Is he starting a church there? Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Ben senses the 1906 earthquake and is desirous of getting as many saved as possible. Rest assured, Ben will regret the fighting.
Thank you for the nice review.
Comment from royowen
It sounds like this is somewhat out of character for Ben Persons, but the rest of it is in character, the way he's been guided by the Holy Spirit is, by my experience spot on Wayne, great episode, well done,
Blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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It sounds like this is somewhat out of character for Ben Persons, but the rest of it is in character, the way he's been guided by the Holy Spirit is, by my experience spot on Wayne, great episode, well done,
Blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 22-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Thank you. rest assured, Ben will regret the fighting. I'm trying to keep Ben human.
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Well done
Comment from JSD
I continue to admire the way you take this man on his journey, following his calling, and yet he is so tough and exciting in the way he behaves. Just great writing. Thank you.
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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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I continue to admire the way you take this man on his journey, following his calling, and yet he is so tough and exciting in the way he behaves. Just great writing. Thank you.
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Comment Written 22-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Thank YOU! For your great review.