Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

I enjoyed this work of free verse. Your words were well-chosen and reflected well the image you wanted to convey. I could feel those cold temperatures, smell the leaves, and foresee the promise of a future lotus.

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. May you have an awesome weekend.

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Comment from royowen

Excellent

I think that beauty can grow in the very things that are dying, it is a sign of death in resurrection my friend, fom the old comes the new, from death comes life, beautifully written blessings Roy
Typo : At the dam(n)

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 Comment Written 11-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023

Thank you, Roy, I fixed that typo. I appreciate the understanding and kind review. May you have a wonderful weekend.

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reply by royowen on 11-Aug-2023

Well done

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a very nice poem that you had written, and I enjoyed it very much. It looks beautiful on the page and you have spaced it well, and made it pretty for the reader. Patricia.

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 Comment Written 11-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023

Thank you, Patricia. I appreciate the understanding and kind review. May you have a wonderful weekend.

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