2023 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I love personification in Writing. This poem is sweet because the Sun is always there, going to sleep when we do at night, it's like part of the family, rising with us again in the morning. Except writing! Love Alrcàn.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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I love personification in Writing. This poem is sweet because the Sun is always there, going to sleep when we do at night, it's like part of the family, rising with us again in the morning. Except writing! Love Alrcàn.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much, Alexan.
Love oxoxo
marival
Comment from Ricky1024
The Ruby sunset
The good night wind
The moon's glow
All sound like an interesting way to spend your evening.
Thanks for sharing your haiku and have a blessed day.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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The Ruby sunset
The good night wind
The moon's glow
All sound like an interesting way to spend your evening.
Thanks for sharing your haiku and have a blessed day.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 25-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your haiku poem- nice picture presentation- good syllable count and flow- poem is uncomplicated and paints a picture of a persons emotional and physical ties to earths cycles - good job AP
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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I like your haiku poem- nice picture presentation- good syllable count and flow- poem is uncomplicated and paints a picture of a persons emotional and physical ties to earths cycles - good job AP
Comment Written 25-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Sunsets are soothing and magical and you brought this one to life here as darkness follows and we fall into a deep restful sleep, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Sunsets are soothing and magical and you brought this one to life here as darkness follows and we fall into a deep restful sleep, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 25-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
That's lovely to imagine the sunset tucking us in at the end of the day. And the lullaby is the wind whispering a goodnight song. Delightful haiku for the evening.
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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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That's lovely to imagine the sunset tucking us in at the end of the day. And the lullaby is the wind whispering a goodnight song. Delightful haiku for the evening.
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Comment Written 25-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Thank you, big sisters. I love sunsets. Especially near the water.
Love xoxo
Marival