Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Debi, This is a very lovely and heart felt poem you have penned for Kenzie. She is a very beautiful and very talented young lady, just like you. Your words were beautiful! Thank you for sharing your blessing with us! love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2023

Comment from Anne Johnston

Excellent

Beautiful girl, and a lovely poem to celebrate her birthday. I only have one granddaughter, who is now an adult, and I love her very much. I don't get to see her very often but am looking forward to a visit next month.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2023

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

Debi, what a beautiful granddaughter you have, my friend. She seems very precious to you, so well reflected in your sweet poem about her. You are very good at expressing your feelings, and you've really nailed it as you also talk about the specificity of it, and bring out her good qualities.

Have a great time with her,
Hugs,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2023

Comment from jmdg1954

Exceptional

Debi,
Good morning. I read this during my lunch break at work yesterday but ran out of time to review. In a way I'm kind of glad I did run short of time.

I needed to read this again this morning because the passing of jannypan has put a damper in me right now.

Your wonderful tribute written for your beautiful granddaughter has lightened my mood, as do all your posts for that matter.

I hope you all enjoyed her special 20th together!

Be well as we are lucky to have you as a friend on this site!

John

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023

John, I love that you read this twice. That is the sweetest compliment ever. Most would have winged it, so I appreciate you so much.
Jan was one of my best friends here and I am sick about this. When she wasn't picking up the phone or answering my text messages, then I called the Midland, Tx police yesterday morning and I was shocked when I heard that she had died.
Thanks again John. I am back looking for our bright side again but feel lost here without Jan. Love, Debi

reply by jmdg1954 on 25-Jul-2023

As they say, life goes on. And to this shall pass. We just won?t forget her. She will always be remembered even when the slightest little speck of matter pops up, or a word or a veteran. She will never be forgotten. We?ll make sure of that!

Comment from LJbutterfly

Excellent

Kenzie is a beautiful young lady, and your poetic tribute to the love the two of you share is just as beautiful. I'm sure Kenzie gets her creative side from her grandma, and I'm sure she appreciates you using her work with your poetry. Your Marry-go-Rhyme for Kenzie is imaginative and fun.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2023

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Exceptional

A beautiful birthday poem for your lovely granddaughter, Kenzie. Our grandchildren are such a special gift for us to share. I hope you all enjoy the lakeshore. Beautifully written, as always, Debi.
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023

Thank you so much Valda. Yes, we leave to go on the biggest lake in MN on Saturday for a week. We are treating all our kids and grandkids to cabins and lots of fun. We haven't had a vacation together for years. Anyway, so thank you for this beautiful review, my sweet friend. And thanks so much for the most generous stars. I am always honored by them.

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi Debi,
This poem show your love for and pride in your grand daughter. She is pretty. The photo looks like a senior picture. I sounds like she got creativity from you.
Keep writing and stay healthy,
Have a good rest of the week.
Joan

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023

Thanks Joan, for the very sweet comments for Kenzie and her poem. You are so kind as always and I appreciate them so very much, dear friend.

reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023

Thanks Joan, for the very sweet comments for Kenzie and her poem. You are so kind as always and I appreciate them so very much, dear friend.

reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023

Not sure why that came out twice, but I guess it must mean I thank you twice as much. Lol..hugs!

reply by dragonpoet on 26-Jul-2023

Hi Debbie,
Glitches happen sometimes. HaHa.
Joan

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

Wow! She is a beauty. Twenty is great age. I've not see her art but I'll take your word for it that she is talented. This is wonderful poem. Those grandchildren are so special. I think this one but really love her grandmother.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023

Thanks Beth for the very sweet comments for Kenzie and her poem. You are so kind as always and I appreciate them so very much, dear friend.

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

These words are coming straight from the heart! The author's words
are filled with love, admiration and compliments for her Granddaughter!
Wishing Kenzie a Wonderful Birthday! The poem flows and connects well.
The artwork is beautiful and compliments both the theme and words of
this poem! Great Poem, Debi!

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023

Thanks Maria, for the very sweet comments for Kenzie and her poem. You are so kind as always and I appreciate them so very much, dear friend.

Comment from jake cosmos aller

Excellent

new form for me to try Did you invent it? a nice tribute to your granddaughter who is very lucky to have such a wonderful, loving and lovely grandmother

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023

Thanks Jake, for the very sweet comments for Kenzie and her poem. You are so kind as always and I appreciate them so very much, dear friend.
I would love to see you do one Jake. I did invent it to go with Sally's Circus poems but I do the two kinds of lines to be like the up and down movement.