2023 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from tfawcus
Love that satori line with the idea that the leaves gradually absorb the dusk. Your haiku captures the atmosphere of nightfall perfectly. Always a pleasure to read your poetry.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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Love that satori line with the idea that the leaves gradually absorb the dusk. Your haiku captures the atmosphere of nightfall perfectly. Always a pleasure to read your poetry.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the insightful and kind review. Good night or good day
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Comment from GWHARGIS
This was written with reverence. I could see the tree bending with respect. The imagery was awesome. Very evocative. Thank you for sharing this with us. Gretchen
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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This was written with reverence. I could see the tree bending with respect. The imagery was awesome. Very evocative. Thank you for sharing this with us. Gretchen
Comment Written 18-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the insightful and kind review. Good night or good day
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
Do like the overall presentation for this Haiku. Your color scheme really works for this imagery. Of course, it takes on a different meaning if it was "leaves full at dusk."
Your image below are darning needles or dragonflies?!!
Mark
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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Gypsy,
Do like the overall presentation for this Haiku. Your color scheme really works for this imagery. Of course, it takes on a different meaning if it was "leaves full at dusk."
Your image below are darning needles or dragonflies?!!
Mark
Comment Written 18-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the nice review.
Leaves full of dusk is a zen concept.
Good night or good day
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Eleri
This is a very atmospheric short poem. I love the idea of the departing sun leaving the leaves full of dusk - it really works as an image here and suits the Haiku form.
Eleri
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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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This is a very atmospheric short poem. I love the idea of the departing sun leaving the leaves full of dusk - it really works as an image here and suits the Haiku form.
Eleri
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Comment Written 18-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the insightful and kind review. Good night or good day
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Comment from royowen
I love that expression of the leaves being full of dusk, it suggests that there is an ambiguous thing going on, which is entirely a wonderfully poetic exclamation, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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I love that expression of the leaves being full of dusk, it suggests that there is an ambiguous thing going on, which is entirely a wonderfully poetic exclamation, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 18-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the insightful and kind review. Good night or good day
Gypsy hugs
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Well done