It's Time Again
Summertime Sounds27 total reviews
Comment from tfawcus
The Trijan Refrain is a form I've not encountered before. You use its rhythms in a way that resonates with the sounds of a summer evening. Very nicely done.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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The Trijan Refrain is a form I've not encountered before. You use its rhythms in a way that resonates with the sounds of a summer evening. Very nicely done.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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Thank you, Tony. It's fun to do. You should give it a try. Hope all is well with you and yours. So good to hear from you.
Comment from tfawcus
The Trijan Refrain is a form I've not encountered before. You use its rhythms in a way that resonates with the sounds of a summer evening. Very nicely done.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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The Trijan Refrain is a form I've not encountered before. You use its rhythms in a way that resonates with the sounds of a summer evening. Very nicely done.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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Thank you. I think you did what I did the other day and sent your review twice. 8-)
Comment from royowen
Well done with this one Yvonne, you have written a fine trijain refrain. I generally like repeating lines, the normally strengthen the whole poem, well done, good job, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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Well done with this one Yvonne, you have written a fine trijain refrain. I generally like repeating lines, the normally strengthen the whole poem, well done, good job, blessings Roy
Comment Written 09-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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Thank you. I appreciate your lovely comments. Most of the poems with repeating lines, I like.
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Well done
Comment from June Sargent
This poem reads like a song of summer sounds of joy! It's a beautiful example of a trijan refrain. Your poems of nature are always outstanding. I really enjoyed this one!
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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This poem reads like a song of summer sounds of joy! It's a beautiful example of a trijan refrain. Your poems of nature are always outstanding. I really enjoyed this one!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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Thank you, June! I really appreciate you saying that. Thanks for the lovely review and six. -Yvonne
Comment from Sally Law
This looks very difficult and you nailed it like a pro, Yvonne. Beautifully written and illustrated in spring green. Summer sounds are all around in my yard too.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best for the challenge.
Sal xoxo's
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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This looks very difficult and you nailed it like a pro, Yvonne. Beautifully written and illustrated in spring green. Summer sounds are all around in my yard too.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best for the challenge.
Sal xoxo's
Comment Written 09-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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Thank you. I love the sounds of summer. It's the heat I hate. hahaha
Comment from aryr
This was a great trijan refrain, damommy. I loved the picture of all the cicadas. I really loved your words because they told the truth about nature. Blessings n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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This was a great trijan refrain, damommy. I loved the picture of all the cicadas. I really loved your words because they told the truth about nature. Blessings n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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Thank you. I love hearing them in the trees.
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Most welcome, Yvonne.
Comment from harmony13
The author's poem is nature based and the description of the scene was
awesome! I liked the author's creativity in using the sounds to create
this poem are musical! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork
is perfect and goes well with the theme and words of this poem.
Hope you had a great Sunday!.....Maroa
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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The author's poem is nature based and the description of the scene was
awesome! I liked the author's creativity in using the sounds to create
this poem are musical! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork
is perfect and goes well with the theme and words of this poem.
Hope you had a great Sunday!.....Maroa
Comment Written 09-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your club poem was excellent, Yvonne. I enjoyed
reading it. You adhered to the complex rhyme scheme
and repeated refrain perfectly. There were great examples
of alliteration scattered throughout. I liked the mention
of nature's critters creating a concert which could be
heard inside or outside. Before reading your poem, I
admired its display. The image fit nicely. I liked the
mention of the morning glory blossoms. The repeated
lines fit seamlessly-- with the first one wrapping up the
previous lines, and the second one leading into the last
line of the verse.
Thanks for participating, Jan
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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Your club poem was excellent, Yvonne. I enjoyed
reading it. You adhered to the complex rhyme scheme
and repeated refrain perfectly. There were great examples
of alliteration scattered throughout. I liked the mention
of nature's critters creating a concert which could be
heard inside or outside. Before reading your poem, I
admired its display. The image fit nicely. I liked the
mention of the morning glory blossoms. The repeated
lines fit seamlessly-- with the first one wrapping up the
previous lines, and the second one leading into the last
line of the verse.
Thanks for participating, Jan
Comment Written 09-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review and stars! Thank you for the lovely comments.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fine form and I enjoyed your well chosen repeated lines to give this poem its backbone. Those songs sound good outside in nature, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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This is a fine form and I enjoyed your well chosen repeated lines to give this poem its backbone. Those songs sound good outside in nature, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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Thank you. I love the sounds of summer, but not the heat. hahaha
Comment from judiverse
This is beautiful. It's so lyrical, and the repeated lines work perfectly. You have the reader imagining the sounds of the cicadas and crickets. You also bring in sensory appeal with the clover and rose. Lovely description of the calm at the end of the day. Great work with the Trijan Refrain. judi
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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This is beautiful. It's so lyrical, and the repeated lines work perfectly. You have the reader imagining the sounds of the cicadas and crickets. You also bring in sensory appeal with the clover and rose. Lovely description of the calm at the end of the day. Great work with the Trijan Refrain. judi
Comment Written 09-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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Thank you. Your lovely comments mean a lot to me.
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You're welcome. This was beautiful work. judi
