One Man's Calling
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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This part of Ben's story, to me, is stronger than before his near death. You have scratched well below the surface to let us enter into Ben's skin. Outstanding work. kay
The pall player was walking to the park > ball
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2023
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This part of Ben's story, to me, is stronger than before his near death. You have scratched well below the surface to let us enter into Ben's skin. Outstanding work. kay
The pall player was walking to the park > ball
Comment Written 01-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2023
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Oops! thanks for catching my mis.
And thank you for your great review.
Comment from royowen
Ben gets pulled in to enter a prize for a dime in hitting a ball successfully, after I think he hadn't actually played before, however one of the fielders unconsciously seems to be showing him how to do it, and he succeeds with the final pitch, however the game he wants to play is preaching the gospel, and that's what he does, beautifully written Wayne, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2023
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Ben gets pulled in to enter a prize for a dime in hitting a ball successfully, after I think he hadn't actually played before, however one of the fielders unconsciously seems to be showing him how to do it, and he succeeds with the final pitch, however the game he wants to play is preaching the gospel, and that's what he does, beautifully written Wayne, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 01-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2023
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Thank you for your very nice review.
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Most welcome