Comment from Regina Elliott

Excellent

Excellent poem, short, but
delivers a big and wise
statement. May you have
success in the contest, this is
a strong contender. Many
blessings, and have a grand
upcoming weekend. ~

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023

Thank you so much!
Xo
Jessica

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Wonderful-- Rhymed 1-6-1 writing -- prompt entry for the Contest.
Good rhyme that doesn't sound forced. Nice presentation and imagery. Good luck in the contest.

Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023

Thank you so much, Gypsy!
Xo
Jessica

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

I think there are a few people I know who think they are the smartest people alive. That's probably why it's so rewarding to see them when they are called out for being wrong. Not nice, I know. This was simple but so powerful. Gretchen

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023

Thank you so much Gretchen!
Xo
Jessica

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very good and well written 1-6-1 poem you have penned for the writing prompt contest. You used very good words and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023

Thank you so much!
Xo
Jessica

reply by Teri7 on 25-Jun-2023

You are so welcome Jessica!!!

Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

The picture shows power and knowledge. Definitely there is nothing he doesn't know.

Your poem meets the requirement of 1-6-1. It is a big challenge to write 1-6-1. You did it beautifully.

Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023

Thank you so much!
Xo
Jessica

Comment from Lisasview

Excellent

Your poem of 1-6-1 made me laugh and then smile... Really so so good and yes, so so true...
The best of luck in the contest....
Lisasview, new to this site............................

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023

Thank you so much!
Xo
Jessica

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

You must have met my grandson. There is nothing new you can tell him because he knows everything.
Stunted Growth is a Well written 1-6-1 poem.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023

Thank you so much, Janet!
Xo
Jessica

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Fantastic artwork and nice presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Good opening words, description, and rhyme.
-You use these few words well with an
attitude with "So," a good question, and
the realization at the end that maybe he does
know everything.
-You did a good job; good luck!!

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2023

Thanks so much, Pam!

reply by Pam (respa) on 25-Jun-2023

You are welcome, Jessica.

Comment from Paul Manton

Excellent

For your first piece, this is a triumph! Starting with Zeus, though, where do you go from here? I imagine the last word might have an interrogative feel to it, and at least one raised eyebrow.
1-6-1 can crash and burn, but not when the king of the gods has your back.
Great job.
Paul

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2023

Thanks Paul!

Comment from Eleri

Excellent

This poem has the correct number of syllables per line for the 1-6-1 contest and has good end rhymes. The idea behind it is good as well so I wish you the best in the competition
Eleri

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2023

Thank you!