Music
a nonet23 total reviews
Comment from Ben Colder
Yes, "The Thrill is gone." Yep. BB has got it. I remember when he came to our city and Bobby Blue bland. They packed it out. Hope you win the contest. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2023
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Yes, "The Thrill is gone." Yep. BB has got it. I remember when he came to our city and Bobby Blue bland. They packed it out. Hope you win the contest. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2023
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Ben, Those were truly the great...goood old days! Thanks!
Comment from Sanku
It is true .I can wholeheartedly agree to evrything in this verse, especially 'it can inspire us and lift our spirits'. Well crafted 'nonet ' poem. all the best for the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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It is true .I can wholeheartedly agree to evrything in this verse, especially 'it can inspire us and lift our spirits'. Well crafted 'nonet ' poem. all the best for the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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Sanku, I apprecaite your validation. Thank you!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count and from are good,
along with the topic.
-You give many good examples of what
music means to you, and it can do
many things, depending on our mood.
-If happy, it brings joy; if sad or lonely,
it can bring a sense of peace and comfort.
-It definitely inspires us and is art.
-A very good entry; good luck!
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2023
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count and from are good,
along with the topic.
-You give many good examples of what
music means to you, and it can do
many things, depending on our mood.
-If happy, it brings joy; if sad or lonely,
it can bring a sense of peace and comfort.
-It definitely inspires us and is art.
-A very good entry; good luck!
Comment Written 10-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2023
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Pam, thank you, have a splendid weekend!
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You are welcome and have a great weekend, too!
Comment from Lisasview
To begin with I just love the image of B.B. King...Great color!!
I do have a question about your use of punctuation...
Since you have a comma after several lines I think the next line would not begin with a capital? Just my thoughts...
Lisa, new to this site
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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2023
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To begin with I just love the image of B.B. King...Great color!!
I do have a question about your use of punctuation...
Since you have a comma after several lines I think the next line would not begin with a capital? Just my thoughts...
Lisa, new to this site
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2023
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Helped me, welcome to the site.
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Now that is great.. Often, unless we go over and over our work we make small errors..
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Comment from jenintorre
This is a very cleverly constructed nonet poem and a very good entry for the competition. I agree, music certainly does all those things.
Great artwork and presentation. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2023
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This is a very cleverly constructed nonet poem and a very good entry for the competition. I agree, music certainly does all those things.
Great artwork and presentation. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2023
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Jenintorre, thank you so much.
Comment from jmdg1954
Writer...
Thank you for explaining the nonet style of poetry. It sounds like a fun version.
Your poem on music and picturing BB Kong, excellent choices.
The nonet was perfect and told its story.
Best of luck in the contest.
John
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2023
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Writer...
Thank you for explaining the nonet style of poetry. It sounds like a fun version.
Your poem on music and picturing BB Kong, excellent choices.
The nonet was perfect and told its story.
Best of luck in the contest.
John
Comment Written 09-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2023
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John, thanks much!
Comment from royowen
Music can be strict in its form, but creative in its purpose, I've written many songs, but the one thing that always struck me, was that they were all uniquely, just like every grain of sand, snowflake and human beings are unique, a beautifully written nonet, beautifully written, good luck, blessings
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
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Music can be strict in its form, but creative in its purpose, I've written many songs, but the one thing that always struck me, was that they were all uniquely, just like every grain of sand, snowflake and human beings are unique, a beautifully written nonet, beautifully written, good luck, blessings
Comment Written 09-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
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Roy, thank you very much.
Comment from harmony13
I found the author's words uplifting, descriptive and creative. I liked the ending to this poem especially the last 3 lines! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork chosen is perfect and reminds me of
New Orleans! Have a great weekend!....Maria
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
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I found the author's words uplifting, descriptive and creative. I liked the ending to this poem especially the last 3 lines! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork chosen is perfect and reminds me of
New Orleans! Have a great weekend!....Maria
Comment Written 09-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
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Maria, thank you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Although the formation of words is slighting out here, I adored the fine sentiments and music is always positive and magical in our lives, I wish you luck with the contest,
Suggestion for line three to bring it in line:
(pacify an anxious mind)
love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
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Although the formation of words is slighting out here, I adored the fine sentiments and music is always positive and magical in our lives, I wish you luck with the contest,
Suggestion for line three to bring it in line:
(pacify an anxious mind)
love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
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Thank you.
Comment from Ginda Simpson
This is a fine example of the Nonet poetry form. The subject works well, exploring all the benefits and attributes that music holds for us. It is indeed art.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
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This is a fine example of the Nonet poetry form. The subject works well, exploring all the benefits and attributes that music holds for us. It is indeed art.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
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Thank you.