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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I loved the enjambement you used in this poem. It lifted it from the banal to something special. I also appreciated the concept of drowning in blood (perhaps your own?). kay
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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I loved the enjambement you used in this poem. It lifted it from the banal to something special. I also appreciated the concept of drowning in blood (perhaps your own?). kay
Comment Written 06-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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It's not about me, but my art immitates my life. It's loosely based on my experiences.
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Virtual Six Stars! Exceptional! I almost don't have words to review this. The entire presentation is perfect. The colors, images, fonts, perfect. The emotion that radiates from poem is perfect. Your presentations are Poetry Art, Gypsy; and yes, I just made that up! Be blessed! Alex
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Virtual Six Stars! Exceptional! I almost don't have words to review this. The entire presentation is perfect. The colors, images, fonts, perfect. The emotion that radiates from poem is perfect. Your presentations are Poetry Art, Gypsy; and yes, I just made that up! Be blessed! Alex
Comment Written 06-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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I like Poetry art. :)
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from GWHARGIS
This was such a visually intense poem. I love the red sky and the bleeding sea. So dramatic. They both make you think of pain and suffering. Then the symbolic drowning because of the important person's absence. Well written. Gretchen
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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This was such a visually intense poem. I love the red sky and the bleeding sea. So dramatic. They both make you think of pain and suffering. Then the symbolic drowning because of the important person's absence. Well written. Gretchen
Comment Written 06-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a very beautiful Tanka poem you have penned. You used great descriptive words that go so well with your amazing imagery. Thank you for sharing! love and blessings, Teri
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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Gypsy, This is a very beautiful Tanka poem you have penned. You used great descriptive words that go so well with your amazing imagery. Thank you for sharing! love and blessings, Teri
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Comment Written 06-Jun-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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You are so welcome my friend!!!
Comment from lyenochka
That's really sad to miss everything about a missing loved one. Perhaps the scent will linger but the visual memory goes and the sound of the loved one's voice can go. Then even the echoes in memory disappear.
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That's really sad to miss everything about a missing loved one. Perhaps the scent will linger but the visual memory goes and the sound of the loved one's voice can go. Then even the echoes in memory disappear.
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Comment Written 06-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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Thank you, Big Sister, I'm feeling melancholic today, I guess it shows in my writing.
Love,
MariVal
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Sending hugs 💞💞