Rare Spring Storm
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Comment from jake cosmos aller
very powerful and moving poem about an epic storm and the power and thrill of watching the storm and nature at its most awesome moment. The author notes were very helpful. Where in the world are you?
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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very powerful and moving poem about an epic storm and the power and thrill of watching the storm and nature at its most awesome moment. The author notes were very helpful. Where in the world are you?
Comment Written 06-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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Jake, I thank you so much for the kind words for my poem and the photo I took for the contest. I was happy to get this one because I have always found weather fascinating. Thanks again for the great review, my friend
Comment from Gloria ....
Having been a weather follower for my entire life, I quite enjoyed your poem, Debi. It seems to be different now, and of course we humans, particularly farmers, pay special attention to what the skies/heavens might bring.
The storms are unusual and more severe in all seasons now and that can be attributed to whichever philosophy one believes in.
Well done, and many thanks for sharing a rare photograph and fine poem. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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Having been a weather follower for my entire life, I quite enjoyed your poem, Debi. It seems to be different now, and of course we humans, particularly farmers, pay special attention to what the skies/heavens might bring.
The storms are unusual and more severe in all seasons now and that can be attributed to whichever philosophy one believes in.
Well done, and many thanks for sharing a rare photograph and fine poem. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 06-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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Hi Gloria. It is always so nice to hear from you. Thank you for your kind comments for this poem and photo. Although we have experienced storms w more damage in the past, we have never seen the sky look like that before. We have fields all around us so we do have an opportunity for nice pictures. Especially w the power lines in the background. Thanks again, my friend!
Comment from jessizero
This poem told a story of an exciting event in poetic format. I liked your rhymes, and I think it captured the photo perfectly. You used good descriptions (like the clouds being black and blue as though in a fight). I am glad you are safe! Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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This poem told a story of an exciting event in poetic format. I liked your rhymes, and I think it captured the photo perfectly. You used good descriptions (like the clouds being black and blue as though in a fight). I am glad you are safe! Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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Hi Jess. Thanks for the great review and kind words for my Poem. my friend
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Hi Jess. Thanks for the great review and kind words for my Poem. my friend
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Comment from evilynne
What a great picture and awesome poem. I can just feel the hot air and the power of the approaching storm. Your author's notes supply interesting information (thanks to your hubby). Best of luck in the contest! Evi
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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What a great picture and awesome poem. I can just feel the hot air and the power of the approaching storm. Your author's notes supply interesting information (thanks to your hubby). Best of luck in the contest! Evi
Comment Written 05-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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Evi, I thank you so much for the kind words for my poem and the photo I took for the contest. I so appreciate your gracious gift of six stars too.
I have other pictures in my portfolio that show the same fields and power lines by our home, but all different scenarios of weather.
I find weather fascinating. Thanks again for the great review, my friend
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great photo and nice presentation, Debi.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-The weather does some crazy things sometimes.
-You wrote a good poem about it with
effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like the comparison of the field to gold mine.
-You create a vivid word picture of the storm.
-A good entry; good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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-Great photo and nice presentation, Debi.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-The weather does some crazy things sometimes.
-You wrote a good poem about it with
effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like the comparison of the field to gold mine.
-You create a vivid word picture of the storm.
-A good entry; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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Hi Pam, I thank you for the very kind comments for my Poem and picture .
I appreciate it so much my search friend
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You are very welcome, Debi.
Comment from Teri7
Debi, This is a very interesting poem, picture and comments you have shared with us. I have come to realize that as much as I love snow we probably won't get any until around Christmas, hopefully. I just trust the Lord knows what he is doing and I just have to learn to listen to Him, not always the weather man! Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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Debi, This is a very interesting poem, picture and comments you have shared with us. I have come to realize that as much as I love snow we probably won't get any until around Christmas, hopefully. I just trust the Lord knows what he is doing and I just have to learn to listen to Him, not always the weather man! Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 05-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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Hi Teri, I thank you so much for the kind words for my poem and the photo I took for the contest, as well as your gracious six stars. I have other pictures in my portfolio that show the same fields and power lines by our home, but all different scenarios of weather.
I find weather fascinating. Thanks again for the great review, my friend
Comment from Sanku
The picture clearly shows the dark clouds.Storms are so scary arent they?
very well written poem about how you saw the sky changing .I am glad you went inside
I hope you are keeping well. hugs Santha.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2023
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The picture clearly shows the dark clouds.Storms are so scary arent they?
very well written poem about how you saw the sky changing .I am glad you went inside
I hope you are keeping well. hugs Santha.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2023
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Santha, thank you so much for the kind words for my poem and the photo I took for the contest. I have other pictures in my portfolio that show the same fields and power lines by our home, but all different scenarios of weather.
I find weather fascinating. Thanks again for the great review, my friend.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are extremely descriptive and creative. I thought about how these events are so fascinating and alarming as the author describes well throughout these words. Thank you for the author's notes - the education is great! The artwork is awesome and compliments this
poem. Hi Debi, hope you are doing well....Maria
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2023
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The author's words are extremely descriptive and creative. I thought about how these events are so fascinating and alarming as the author describes well throughout these words. Thank you for the author's notes - the education is great! The artwork is awesome and compliments this
poem. Hi Debi, hope you are doing well....Maria
Comment Written 05-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2023
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Hi Maria, I thank you so much for the kind words for my poem and the photo I took for the contest. I have other pictures in my portfolio that show the same fields and power lines by our home, but all different scenarios of weather.
I find weather fascinating. Thanks again for the great review, my friend.
Comment from Mintybee
This is a cool picture, and a cool poem to go with it. I particularly liked the lines, "The clouds were black and blue like they'd been in a bitter fight/ The field looked like a gold mine that was sprinkled with sunlight" That captured the look clearly and vividly. Thanks for the extra info in the notes. I've always found the science behind storms very interesting.
Mintybee
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2023
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This is a cool picture, and a cool poem to go with it. I particularly liked the lines, "The clouds were black and blue like they'd been in a bitter fight/ The field looked like a gold mine that was sprinkled with sunlight" That captured the look clearly and vividly. Thanks for the extra info in the notes. I've always found the science behind storms very interesting.
Mintybee
Comment Written 05-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2023
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Hey there Mintybee, I thank you so much for the kind words for my poem and the photo I took for the contest. I have other pictures in my portfolio that show the same fields and power lines by our home, but all different scenarios of weather. I find weather fascinating. Thanks again for the great review, my friend.
Comment from royowen
This is a fine heptametric poem in fine couplet rhyming. This is a beautifully crafted poem dear Debi, I think you've made great strides in your poetic development, how do you feel you're going? And you're writing prolifically, wonderful job, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2023
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This is a fine heptametric poem in fine couplet rhyming. This is a beautifully crafted poem dear Debi, I think you've made great strides in your poetic development, how do you feel you're going? And you're writing prolifically, wonderful job, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2023
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Roy, I thank you so much for the kind words for my poem and the photo I took for the contest. I have other pictures in my portfolio that show the same fields and power lines by our home, but all different scenarios of weather.
I find weather fascinating. Thanks again for the great review, my friend.
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Most welcome Debi,