Pen Your Dreams
a 1-6-1 poetic form29 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi,
This poem encourages us to follow our dreams in writing and in life in this mono-rhyme entry in the 1-6-1 contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Enjoy your weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
Hi,
This poem encourages us to follow our dreams in writing and in life in this mono-rhyme entry in the 1-6-1 contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Enjoy your weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Thanks so much, Joan!
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You are most kindly welcome.
Joan
Comment from LJbutterfly
Your well chosen words provides exceptional advice for all writers, be biographical, fiction, or poetry. We all have ideas floating around in our mind. Your question is thought-provoking. When? Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
Your well chosen words provides exceptional advice for all writers, be biographical, fiction, or poetry. We all have ideas floating around in our mind. Your question is thought-provoking. When? Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-6-1, Pen Your Dreams, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that two years from now they will have something published or not, but they will be two years older.
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
This 1-6-1, Pen Your Dreams, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that two years from now they will have something published or not, but they will be two years older.
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Thanks so much, Bill!
Comment from rspoet
This is an meaningful 1-6-1 poem for the contest
with excellent grammatical connection of lines
and three smooth rhymes that are not forced.
Good choice of art work to match the theme.
The best one I've read so far.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
This is an meaningful 1-6-1 poem for the contest
with excellent grammatical connection of lines
and three smooth rhymes that are not forced.
Good choice of art work to match the theme.
The best one I've read so far.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Thanks so much, Robert!
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are thought provoking, meaningful and creative. The first two lines of this poem flow n connect well. The last line says it all!
I found the author's words have a great message! The artwork is awesome
and compliments these words. Have a great weekend!...Maria
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
The author's words are thought provoking, meaningful and creative. The first two lines of this poem flow n connect well. The last line says it all!
I found the author's words have a great message! The artwork is awesome
and compliments these words. Have a great weekend!...Maria
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Thanks so much, Maria!
Comment from Dawn Munro
Wow, what a marvelous, tiny poem and your choice of artwork is stunning. Indeed, now IS the time to write what we dream about, but also, to work towards our goals.
Nicely done -- a clever double-meaning. :)
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
Wow, what a marvelous, tiny poem and your choice of artwork is stunning. Indeed, now IS the time to write what we dream about, but also, to work towards our goals.
Nicely done -- a clever double-meaning. :)
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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thanks so very much Dawn!
Comment from tempeste
Ciao Sugarray!
The beautiful artwork drew me in and illustrates well your poem.
I just read recently that writing down one's dreams on a paper makes our brain get busy thinking how we can achieve our goal.
We should write a letter to our future self and write eg;
By the end of 2023 I will have my driver's license.
It also pointed out to not write : I hope , I will try to get my license.
To avoid doubt hence failure , we should put :
I WILL HAVE my licence ..
That way our brain is spurred to find away to make it happen.
I thought you were very creative in this challenging format.
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
Ciao Sugarray!
The beautiful artwork drew me in and illustrates well your poem.
I just read recently that writing down one's dreams on a paper makes our brain get busy thinking how we can achieve our goal.
We should write a letter to our future self and write eg;
By the end of 2023 I will have my driver's license.
It also pointed out to not write : I hope , I will try to get my license.
To avoid doubt hence failure , we should put :
I WILL HAVE my licence ..
That way our brain is spurred to find away to make it happen.
I thought you were very creative in this challenging format.
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Thank you Franca! I think we have to be intentional and penning our dreams is a very positive way to achieve many different goals. I really appreciate your take on this very short verse :). Hugs!!
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Ciao !
you now have 6 votes.😐
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Thanks you sweet Franca!!
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I?m glad to see you back posting ..
Keep safe ! 🍀
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great artwork and nice presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Good use of rhyme and a very good message
about penning your dreams so they are not forgotten.
-A very good entry; good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
-Great artwork and nice presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Good use of rhyme and a very good message
about penning your dreams so they are not forgotten.
-A very good entry; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Thanks so much Pam!
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This entry into the contest is well done and follows all the rules by rhyming the end words and developing a concept of penning your dreams which is a wonderful message. This shares a dream of mine to write down all the dreams I have had the night before. Thanks for sharing and may you do well in the contest.
Jesse
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
This entry into the contest is well done and follows all the rules by rhyming the end words and developing a concept of penning your dreams which is a wonderful message. This shares a dream of mine to write down all the dreams I have had the night before. Thanks for sharing and may you do well in the contest.
Jesse
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Thanks so much Jesse!
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You're welcome.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello, Mystery Writer!
So perceptive!
I do attempt to record my dreams by keeping my phone next to my bedside, but a tad bit difficult not to awake my husband! Oh! But sometimes, those dreams are so vivid and do transfer to my poetry.
Well-stated with creativity and flair!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
Hello, Mystery Writer!
So perceptive!
I do attempt to record my dreams by keeping my phone next to my bedside, but a tad bit difficult not to awake my husband! Oh! But sometimes, those dreams are so vivid and do transfer to my poetry.
Well-stated with creativity and flair!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Thanks so much, Diane!