Prayer
My conversations with God.38 total reviews
Comment from Douglas Goff
This was a ver nice 5 5 5 poem. Seems people
Understand that He always hears, but we don't always like the answer.
I guess sometimes getting no answer is His answer. Anyways, I'm still waiting for that Porsche. Ha!
Nice work.
D
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
This was a ver nice 5 5 5 poem. Seems people
Understand that He always hears, but we don't always like the answer.
I guess sometimes getting no answer is His answer. Anyways, I'm still waiting for that Porsche. Ha!
Nice work.
D
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Thanks, Doug. I really hope you get that Porsche.
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Yes, indeed, God hears our prayers, especially when we kneel and bow our heads. But we soon learn that he hears them from wherever we are, as long as our hearts are asking. Beautiful poem.
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
Yes, indeed, God hears our prayers, especially when we kneel and bow our heads. But we soon learn that he hears them from wherever we are, as long as our hearts are asking. Beautiful poem.
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Thanks, Ginda. Prayers are important.
Comment from Regina Elliott
Congratulations dear poet
for your stellar poem's win.
A thoughtful write on prayer
and it's importance in communicating with God.
Many blessings to you. ~
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
Congratulations dear poet
for your stellar poem's win.
A thoughtful write on prayer
and it's importance in communicating with God.
Many blessings to you. ~
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Thanks, Regina. It has been a long time between wins.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Firstly, congratulations on your win Paul, I don't know how I missed this poem. A fine faithful and hopeful poem for the contest, much enjoyed, love Christine x x x x
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
Firstly, congratulations on your win Paul, I don't know how I missed this poem. A fine faithful and hopeful poem for the contest, much enjoyed, love Christine x x x x
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Thanks, Christine. It's been a long time between wins.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Paul, I can certainly understand why this 5-5-5 poem won the contest. It just says it all whether you're a believer or not. I do hope someone will be listening. The world needs it. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
Hi Paul, I can certainly understand why this 5-5-5 poem won the contest. It just says it all whether you're a believer or not. I do hope someone will be listening. The world needs it. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Thanks, Ulla. I get lucky every once in awhile.
Comment from Spitfire
Congratulations on winning first prize. Betting God heard your prayers for this one. LOL Excellent choice of words to rhyme at the end. The second line implies so much.
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
Congratulations on winning first prize. Betting God heard your prayers for this one. LOL Excellent choice of words to rhyme at the end. The second line implies so much.
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Thanks, Shari. You guessed what I was praying for.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written 5 7 5 poem. Beautiful photo choice to compliment your words. This is a Very lovely spiritual poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
This is a beautifully written 5 7 5 poem. Beautiful photo choice to compliment your words. This is a Very lovely spiritual poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Thanks, Joanne. This entry did win. First win in awhile.
Comment from Sanku
True God will always hear what we have to say .but even when life is not in disarray ,we should kneel and pray .all the best for the contest .good syllable count..
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
True God will always hear what we have to say .but even when life is not in disarray ,we should kneel and pray .all the best for the contest .good syllable count..
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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You are right, Santha. God appreciates a thank you now and then.
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Succinctly laid out as a short expression of the poet's feeling, the poem exudes a tangible power and positivity. It assures the reader that God listens and hears us. I noted the beautiful rhyme also.
Very well written.
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
Succinctly laid out as a short expression of the poet's feeling, the poem exudes a tangible power and positivity. It assures the reader that God listens and hears us. I noted the beautiful rhyme also.
Very well written.
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Thanks, Mario. Kneeling gets tougher with age.
Comment from royowen
One could God, the Master builder, the repairer of the breach, the restorer of our souls, the God of all the universe, who created and maintains its integrity for that final hour. Beautifully written My friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-May-2023
One could God, the Master builder, the repairer of the breach, the restorer of our souls, the God of all the universe, who created and maintains its integrity for that final hour. Beautifully written My friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-May-2023
reply by the author on 05-May-2023
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Thanks, Roy.
I'm wearing out the knees of my pants.
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Well done