Love and Loss
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "What's for dinner"NaPoWriMo April Poetry Contest
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Comment from jmdg1954
This 5-7-5 poem I think is a contender in this contest.
It tells a story. The title planted a visual in my mind and the poem redirected it.
Great last line : A Reservation
Best of luck,
John
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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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This 5-7-5 poem I think is a contender in this contest.
It tells a story. The title planted a visual in my mind and the poem redirected it.
Great last line : A Reservation
Best of luck,
John
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Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Thanks so much, John!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Clever, imaginative and a fun haiku! The image is perfect and the words spring a surprise which is always enjoyable. A lovely verse which could equally fit into the 'poem in a pocket category'. Well done and good luck! Think it's a strong contender. Take care, Debbie
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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Clever, imaginative and a fun haiku! The image is perfect and the words spring a surprise which is always enjoyable. A lovely verse which could equally fit into the 'poem in a pocket category'. Well done and good luck! Think it's a strong contender. Take care, Debbie
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Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much, Debbie!