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Comment from Calene
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This poem is so sweet. I love the flow of it, and the meaning is so sweet. I am glad to see how many people are willing to share their faith on this platform. Thank you for sharing this. Keep up the good work.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 03-May-2023
    I appreciate your kind review and comments for my prayer pocket poem for my grandchildren. Thank you so much!
Comment from Kerry Foley
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Hello there my friend this is such a beautiful, beautiful poem.

A perfect person in the pocket

Well done....

- Kerry

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 03-May-2023
    I appreciate your kind review and comments for my prayer pocket poem for my grandchildren. Thank you so much!
Comment from nomi338
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Children and their children have no idea just how fortunate they are. A prayerful parent/grandparent who is always on the job and on the watch for the safety of their souls, do powerful work with the heavenly home office in seeking to protect them.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 03-May-2023
    Nomi, I appreciate your kind review and comments for my prayer pocket poem for my grandchildren. Thank you so much!
Comment from Mintybee
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This poem took the contest name literally, and met that criteria. It's a sweet and simple poem about being a loving grandparent. Your rhyme and rhythm are pretty consistent. Best wishes for your contest.
Mintybee

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 03-May-2023
    I appreciate your kind review and comments for my prayer pocket poem for my grandchildren. Thank you so much!
Comment from royowen
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Oh yes indeed, our loved ones need our prayers, they may not be secure in the hands of others, but I know they are locked up in God's thoughts, but because He loves us too, He wants us to partner with Him in keeping loved one in His attention, beautifully written, an excellent post, smooth, articulate, and well rhymed, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 03-May-2023
    Hi Roy, I appreciate your kind review and comments for my prayer pocket poem for my grandchildren. Thank you so much!
reply by royowen on 03-May-2023
    Good job
Comment from Terry Broxson
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This is an excellent poem for this contest. The concept of a poem in your pocket is a good one for a contest. The fact you chose to share your faith and do so with grandkids is a beautiful message. Very well done. Terry.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 03-May-2023
    Hi Terry, I appreciate your kind review and comments for my prayer pocket poem for my grandchildren. Thank you so much!
Comment from GWHARGIS
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What a beautiful poem. It was uplifting and shows a grandparent who is concerned for their spiritual life as well as their physical one. Thank you for posting. Gretchen

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 03-May-2023
    Dear Gretchen, I appreciate your kind review and comments for my prayer pocket poem for my grandchildren. Thank you so much!
Comment from LateBloomer
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Hello author, your poem is so heartfelt and filled with love. Of special note:

With family out on their own
They'll always need my prayer

(The above is so true. The world is crazy and dangerous, and anything can happen to anyone when they leave the house. Prayers are needed more than ever.)

Perfect photo. Good rhyming. A poem of truth that shows a grandmother's love. Well done. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Xo. LateBloomer ~ Margaret



 Comment Written 29-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 03-May-2023
    Hi Margaret, I appreciate your kind review and comments for my prayer pocket poem for my grandchildren. Thank you so much!
Comment from w.j.debi
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What a delight response to the contest prompt. Family is a wonderful reason to have a prayer in your pocket in poetry form.
Excellent meter and rhyme add to the charm.
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 03-May-2023
    Hey Debi, I appreciate your kind review and comments for my prayer pocket poem for my grandchildren. Thank you so much!
Comment from Janet Foor
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I have a friend who always has a prayer in her pocket for any occasion It's always good to have a prayer ready. I like yours for your grandkids.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 03-May-2023
    Hi Janet, I appreciate your kind review and comments for my prayer pocket poem for my grandchildren. Thank you so much!