Love and Loss
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "No return"NaPoWriMo April Poetry Contest
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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
You have given us a very effective eight word poem, with an attractive presentation. I enjoyed the line end rhyme. Well done, and good luck in the contest. kay
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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023
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You have given us a very effective eight word poem, with an attractive presentation. I enjoyed the line end rhyme. Well done, and good luck in the contest. kay
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Comment Written 27-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much!
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Ahh, this is a clever 8 word poem entry.
In such a small space you have managed to fill it with a thought provoking and reflective read. If only one could rewind. Them were the days. Well done on this great write and best of luck in the competition.
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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023
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Ahh, this is a clever 8 word poem entry.
In such a small space you have managed to fill it with a thought provoking and reflective read. If only one could rewind. Them were the days. Well done on this great write and best of luck in the competition.
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Comment Written 27-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023
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Thank you! Truly appreciated!