Comment from Evelyn Hopkins

Excellent

Pretty! This poem is very beautiful and has a lot of imagery. And the rhymes flow and are well written in time. Hope all is well have a good day and good luck to you! :)

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

love these two lines! can totally "see" that happening!
your dark contour
fades into the sunrise

great tanka with smooth flow and cool picture and colours to accompany

nice work.

thank you for sharing
shelley :)



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 Comment Written 25-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is another lovely poem that you have written in this format. I enjoyed reading it. It is well presented and looks beautiful on the page. Have a good evening. God bless. Patricia.. Patricia

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 Comment Written 25-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023

Thank you very much, I appreciate you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a lovely night/day. God bless you too.

Gypsy
"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away." ? Maya Angelou