Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

Family is important. When you grow up, there might be some quarreling or arguing amongst teenagers. It is not always fun either. But when you get to the age of adulthood you must agree or it is chaos. Glad you enjoyed the fun moments you spent with your family.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023

Thanks so much for your lovely review and kind comments for my poem for Greg. Much appreciated my dear friend!

Comment from LJbutterfly

Excellent

God has given you many gifts. The main one is to have grown up in a large loving family. Even though there were challenges and loss, you had each other. Based on your poem, Greg sounds like a real jewel. How did you ever find that perfect picture? Another gift is your ability to express your ideas and feelings in poetry. This poem is fantastic.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023

As one of my favorite people here, I thank you so very much. I can't tell you how much your kindness always means to me Lorraine. Thanks from the bottom of my heart for this sweet review.

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

I WISH I HAD A SIX!
.This is the most beautiful poem from sisters to a brother.if I got this right you are the only girl who had a big brother in your family. I hope that's right. So sweet. I'm the baby of five also. May he rest in God's Love, Eternity. ð???â?¤ï¸? Thinking of You & Your Family Today. â?¤ï¸?ð???

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023

Alexandra, you are such a sweetheart. Thank you so much for the kind words for this poem for my brother. I appreciate it so very much, my sweet friend.

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi Debi,
This poem uses repetition to let us know how close your were and how you all still like to remember your favorite times with your brother. This can go with all close families.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023

Thanks so much Joan for your very kind review and comments for my poem for my brother, Greg. Your kindness is always so appreciated, dear friend.

reply by dragonpoet on 28-Apr-2023

Don?t mention it, Debi.
Joan

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

i like how the first stanza is like an intro
into each sister having her own stanza -
and the refrain line is perfect!
smooth flow and rhyme and a very fun poem

one suggestion- maybe try a greyish background and a blue font to blend in with the cool picture? just a thought ;)


thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023

Thanks so much Shelley, for your very kind review and comments for my poem for my brother, Greg. Your kindness is always so appreciated, dear friend.

Comment from Anne Johnston

Excellent

Nice picture and great story you have told in your poem to celebrate your brother's birthday. Family is so special. Just spent a few days with my two sisters. Both of our brothers have passed on.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023

Thanks so much Anne, for your very kind review and comments for my poem for my brother, Greg. Your kindness is always so appreciated, dear friend.

Comment from Faith Williams

Excellent

A wonderful birthday poem to celebrate your brother's special day. I'm sure he appreciated the gesture especially when it contains such specific memories. Thanks for sharing! Hope his birthday was fantabulous!

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023

Thanks so much Faith, for your very kind review and comments for my poem for my brother, Greg. Your kindness is always so appreciated, dear friend.

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

This is lovely as usual, Debi. I'm sorry to hear about your brothers. My only sister also passed away when she was forty-eight and her kids were very young:7,11 and 14.
Thanks so much for sharing.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023

Thanks so much Heather, for your very kind review and comments for my poem for my brother, Greg. Your kindness is always so appreciated, dear friend.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This poem, Your Sisters Recall, is a delightful seventieth birthday present that shows the loving memories that are associated with Greg and each sister. Cool.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023

Thanks so much Bill, for your very kind review and comments for my poem for my brother, Greg. Your kindness is always so appreciated, dear friend.

Comment from Paul McFarland

Excellent

Very nice birthday poem, Debi. Big brothers are important - especially to their sisters. They are the protectors when Fathers are not available.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023

Thanks so much Paul, for your very kind review and comments for my poem for my brother, Greg. Your kindness is always so appreciated, dear friend.