Living in Victory
The Bible makes all the difference to living well23 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An uplifting write with good solid end rhymes and I enjoyed your faithful sentiment here as your beliefs have helped you on your journey through life, a fine poem, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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An uplifting write with good solid end rhymes and I enjoyed your faithful sentiment here as your beliefs have helped you on your journey through life, a fine poem, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 16-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Dear Dolly, Thank you, once again, for an inspiring review of one of my poems. It's encouraging that you enjoyed it. Love, Guðbjörg
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Living in Victory, explains in three stanzas how building a strong foundation on God can make all other issues easier to deal with..............................................
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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This poem, Living in Victory, explains in three stanzas how building a strong foundation on God can make all other issues easier to deal with..............................................
Comment Written 15-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Dear Bill, Thank you for your review and rating. You share the main point so clearly! Thanks! Guðbjörg
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job expressing your thoughts and feelings,
Gudbjorg. The rhymes worked nicely, your message was
strong and clear, and the color scheme and picture were
appropriate. I like how you showed readers reading the
Bible every day is important.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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You did a great job expressing your thoughts and feelings,
Gudbjorg. The rhymes worked nicely, your message was
strong and clear, and the color scheme and picture were
appropriate. I like how you showed readers reading the
Bible every day is important.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 15-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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Dear Jan, Thank you so much for giving me such a thorough review, considering each aspect. I feel sorry for those people who haven't yet discovered the benefits to be gained from reading and applying the Bible in their lives. They miss out on so much! God bless! Guðbjörg
Comment from royowen
I was writing a poem this morning, (with difficulty, early morning, my wife in slumber beside me) and I marvelled at that wonderful gift of equality with Christ, it's very hard to apprehend, "I no longer call you servants, but friends", and we are co heirs with Christ, equal in service. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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I was writing a poem this morning, (with difficulty, early morning, my wife in slumber beside me) and I marvelled at that wonderful gift of equality with Christ, it's very hard to apprehend, "I no longer call you servants, but friends", and we are co heirs with Christ, equal in service. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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Dear Roy, The work of a creator never runs smooth but, through the struggle, look at the eternal creations that result. Co-heirs with Christ, equal in service--that's quite daunting, to say the least. Thanks for the compliments on the poem. God bless! Guðbjörg
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What a God we serve
Comment from G0dd0ll
I like this. You have done a wonderful job on your rhymes and it flows through and through. I can remember your feelings myself. You paint a pretty picture with your words. Kudos
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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I like this. You have done a wonderful job on your rhymes and it flows through and through. I can remember your feelings myself. You paint a pretty picture with your words. Kudos
Comment Written 15-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review. Words are wonderful to paint with--but all the more so when applied in a poem about the Lord. Have a wonderful weekend!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation, Gudbjorg.
-A well written poem with a good topic,
effective imagery,and rhyme.
-A good message about trust in verse one.
-Verse two builds on that talking about life
an how it will "sparkle and shine."
-Good questions in the conclusion,
followed by good answers.
-Well done.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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-Very nice image and presentation, Gudbjorg.
-A well written poem with a good topic,
effective imagery,and rhyme.
-A good message about trust in verse one.
-Verse two builds on that talking about life
an how it will "sparkle and shine."
-Good questions in the conclusion,
followed by good answers.
-Well done.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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Dear Pam, Thank you for such a thorough review and for dissecting each element. I'm glad you enjoyed it and hope you have an inspiring weekend! Guðbjörg
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You are very welcome, Gudbjorg, and I appreciate your reply. You have a good weekend, too.
Comment from karenina
I find peace in the Bible, even when my spirit is troubled. Or, perhaps I should say especially then! My grandmom used to tell us to open up the Good Book at random and read whatever passage caught our eye on that page... It's always worked to touch my heart and ease my woe. Blessings on a beautiful poem!
Karenina
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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I find peace in the Bible, even when my spirit is troubled. Or, perhaps I should say especially then! My grandmom used to tell us to open up the Good Book at random and read whatever passage caught our eye on that page... It's always worked to touch my heart and ease my woe. Blessings on a beautiful poem!
Karenina
Comment Written 15-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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Dear Karenina, This is a beautiful review. It seems your Grandmother's generation knew this key that I, too, learned from an old teacher. It's something important to pass on to the upcoming generation. God bless you! Guðbjörg
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Thanks....I enjoyed reading "Living in Victory"
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Comment from patcelaw
This is an absolutely beautiful face poem. I enjoyed listening to it very much. It rhymes well it flows smoothly and you have done a fantastic job with it. Keep writing and I will keep reading. Patricia.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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This is an absolutely beautiful face poem. I enjoyed listening to it very much. It rhymes well it flows smoothly and you have done a fantastic job with it. Keep writing and I will keep reading. Patricia.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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Dear Patricia, Your reviews are so inspiring and encouraging. Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it and I hope it will be a blessing to others, too. Guðbjörg
Comment from Eternal Muse
An excellent spiritual verse with a great message.
Yes, we have to live our lives right each day, per the teachings of the Bible, in love and peace, that's what He would have wanted.
A beautiful verse that brings consolation to a soul.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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An excellent spiritual verse with a great message.
Yes, we have to live our lives right each day, per the teachings of the Bible, in love and peace, that's what He would have wanted.
A beautiful verse that brings consolation to a soul.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much for your perceptive comments. No matter how good we try to be, the key is the precepts the Bible espouses and which alone can lead to a fulfilled life.
Comment from shelley kaye
very nice poem about your faith and how it makes you feel content and safe
a hopeful theme with smooth rhyme and flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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very nice poem about your faith and how it makes you feel content and safe
a hopeful theme with smooth rhyme and flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 15-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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Dear Shelley, Thank you for your encouraging review. I hope it is a poem that touches the hearts of the readers in a deep and loving way. Guðbjörg