Comment from
Sarah Das Gupta
The picture is evocative and complements the poem. The last two lines are effective in summing up the overall mood and tone. There is something magical about dawn!
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Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
Thank you very much .I am sorry for the delayed reply.
reply by Sarah Das Gupta on 16-Apr-2023
Best wishes from Cambridge, Uk on a dull April Day!
Comment from
jenintorre
A good septolet poem but you need seven lines. I also didn't read the rules and a reviewer pointed it out so I've changed it. Good luck in the contest. Jen.
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Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
Thank you for that suggestion . I corrected it.I am very sorry for the delayed reply ..