Tanka Collection
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Comment from Jane Jane King
This is a very enticing and mysterious poem...makes me want to know more...would be a great way to start a book. As well, the artwork is stunning and a perfect fit for the poem. Good job.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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This is a very enticing and mysterious poem...makes me want to know more...would be a great way to start a book. As well, the artwork is stunning and a perfect fit for the poem. Good job.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much, Jane. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, well this could mean several things. One, the reunion went from zero to good morning tiger, really fast. I like those personally. or Things did go as planned and someone was stood up. I don't like those.
Good open ended poem.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Hmm, well this could mean several things. One, the reunion went from zero to good morning tiger, really fast. I like those personally. or Things did go as planned and someone was stood up. I don't like those.
Good open ended poem.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from Lady MJ
This seems like it was written to capture the experience of being disappointed by someone who was supposed to show up but didn't. To me, it could also be a reflection of feelings at the death of someone. As I was reading the poem, it reminded me of an old expression "all dressed up with nowhere to go."
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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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This seems like it was written to capture the experience of being disappointed by someone who was supposed to show up but didn't. To me, it could also be a reflection of feelings at the death of someone. As I was reading the poem, it reminded me of an old expression "all dressed up with nowhere to go."
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Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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I like that expression.
Thank you
Comment from Douglas Goff
This one had a much different feel. Might be those dang pesky crows eating the fruit. Great use of colors. Wonderful. You really are a gift to this site!
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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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This one had a much different feel. Might be those dang pesky crows eating the fruit. Great use of colors. Wonderful. You really are a gift to this site!
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Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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This one was really awful. I rewrote it. Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poems, even the bad ones.
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Comment from AP Apgar
I like your modern tanka poem - unusual syllable and word count-must be modern- gift untouched -fruit devoured by hungry crows- nice picture presentation - good flow- good jobAP
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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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I like your modern tanka poem - unusual syllable and word count-must be modern- gift untouched -fruit devoured by hungry crows- nice picture presentation - good flow- good jobAP
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Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review. I hate it this one and rewrote it from scratch.
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