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Pro Cras Ti Na Ti On

I can not wait, to stop procrastinating.

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Comment from BeyondtheShadows
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Same! I am procrastinating right now!! It is my greatest skill. I remember when I was in college and I would literally wait till hours before a paper was due to do it. It was insane and I use to yell at myself for doing it. Great poem!!

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 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
    That you! It was a last minute, try! I'm still suffering from exactly what you described, from college. I tell myself that geniuses do that. Let's all agree, until that theory becomes well-acceptrd! 😊
Comment from Jane Jane King
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Cute poem. I think that is a problem we all have. Once we have started we have momentum and can keep going, but getting going is sometimes tough. You said a lot in just a few words. Well done. I don't think you need to do any commas.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
    Oh thank you!! Commas are my challenge, as anyone can see. Recently, someone suggested that I could stand to use more commas. Ha Make up my mind people, please! Jk 😊
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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This has some visual humor going on with commas indicating pauses, as if the speaker were taking some tiny breaks between everything even while writing this poem. Nice post.

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 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
    Thank you! That was an attempt at symbolism, as was the broken title. I love symbolism in writing and in art.

    As I mentioned in a reply, above, commas are not my friends. One day, maybe I will write a poem, just for commas. They appear to be so patient, and easy-going, (I e. You don't have to use them!)! But, Heaven-forbid, you use them too much, or not enough. I've imagined a comma, just looking down on me, in disgust, "Tsk, tsk, you still can't figure me out, can you?" I'm sure we all have had such relationships,with commas! Ha