Tanka Collection
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Comment from AP Apgar
I like your jiyu-shi poem- nice picture presentation- good syllable count and flow between lines - commingling old spice and sandalwood musk perfumes together- interesting combinations- old spice takes me back- good job AP
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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I like your jiyu-shi poem- nice picture presentation- good syllable count and flow between lines - commingling old spice and sandalwood musk perfumes together- interesting combinations- old spice takes me back- good job AP
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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LoL. I didn't think about adding a warning. Thank you for the exceptional five stars review and kind words.
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Comment from aryr
A wonderful Jiyu-shi, Gypsy. The dual pictures were wonderful. Your words were wise and truthful. They showed that lust is okay. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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A wonderful Jiyu-shi, Gypsy. The dual pictures were wonderful. Your words were wise and truthful. They showed that lust is okay. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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LoL. I didn't think about adding a warning. Thank you for the exceptional five stars review and kind words. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jane Jane King
This is a very unique and artistic poem with stunning accompanying artwork. It has a very well paced build up with a very powerful and perfect climax. Excellent work.
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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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This is a very unique and artistic poem with stunning accompanying artwork. It has a very well paced build up with a very powerful and perfect climax. Excellent work.
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Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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LoL. I didn't think about adding a warning. Thank you for the exceptional five stars review and kind words.
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Comment from CrystieCookie999
This brought back memories of a couple of relatives who had Old Spice in their bathroom cabinets. Romantic poetry is always a bit harder to write. Interesting staggered format to make it look like the line that says "millennium dance." Good share.
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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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This brought back memories of a couple of relatives who had Old Spice in their bathroom cabinets. Romantic poetry is always a bit harder to write. Interesting staggered format to make it look like the line that says "millennium dance." Good share.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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LoL. I didn't think about adding a warning. Thank you for the exceptional five stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs