Comment from Stephanie Rollins

Excellent

A tanka is a new form of poetry for me. How lovely. What great descriptions. "Where I lost my mind"...I loved that part. This speaks of true, timeless love. It is beautiful.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

reading this makes me think of someone drowning in the expressive eyes of another. So much emotion is encapsulated into so few words here - and what a powerful juxtaposition of words you have created. kay

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 Comment Written 23-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Oh my goodness, Gypsy!
Your well-crafted Tanka gave me chills!
Beautifully rendered.
Exquisite and exotic visual and emotional images.
Wishing I had six stars in my quiver...

Thank you for sharing!
diane

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 Comment Written 23-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023

Diane,

Thank you very much for your exceptional review,
it means a lot to me coming from you.

Gypsy hugs

reply by Mrs. KT on 23-Mar-2023

My pleasure, Gypsy...
Just as an aside, did I read that Annmuma is your sister?
How very wonderful if that is true! :)

reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023

No, my sister lives in Spain and her name is Mina.:)