Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

I liked this piece very much. It's very clever and gives a good strong image to the reader. It's also a bit different which hopefully will make it stand out in the competition.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023

Thank you very much

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

This is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Romance contest. A suitable picture to carry this short poem of love across the finish line with an image of messy sheets and lingering perfume. Nicely done. Best of luck in the competition.

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 Comment Written 15-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023

Thank you very much

Comment from JT traveller

Excellent

I love the chosen colour palette and accompanying illustration. They tell a story in themselves.

The font size makes your romantic, seductive words stand out.

A great job. Jacqueline

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 Comment Written 15-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023

Thank you very much

reply by JT traveller on 15-Mar-2023

A winner IMHO 😊