Tanka Collection
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Comment from aryr
This is a great tanka, Gypsy. The picture show the deep blue bloom of the Sea Holly with the ocean. Better still are your words which tied the bond between the two. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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This is a great tanka, Gypsy. The picture show the deep blue bloom of the Sea Holly with the ocean. Better still are your words which tied the bond between the two. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much, Aryr. It's always good to hear from you. May you have a great day or night, whenever it may be. Blessed be.
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Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
The combination of colours, words and text works very well to give an overall mood of contemplation. The footnotes are very interesting. There seems a rise in the popularity of these Japanese forms.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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The combination of colours, words and text works very well to give an overall mood of contemplation. The footnotes are very interesting. There seems a rise in the popularity of these Japanese forms.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much, Sarah. It's always good to hear from you. May you have a great day or night, whenever it may be.
Gypsy hugs
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Best wishes!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These grow in Scotland on the beaches and I believe Shakespeare wrote about them too. I prickly plant, and your write concentrates on the waves here, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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These grow in Scotland on the beaches and I believe Shakespeare wrote about them too. I prickly plant, and your write concentrates on the waves here, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much, Dolly. It's always good to hear from you. May you have a great day or night, whenever it may be.
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Comment from lyenochka
That's so pretty! I wonder if sea holly plants are related to teasel plants. Then you would have two meanings of "tease."
I like how the "~ coming and going ~" of the waves "tease" the logical sense of the narrator.
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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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That's so pretty! I wonder if sea holly plants are related to teasel plants. Then you would have two meanings of "tease."
I like how the "~ coming and going ~" of the waves "tease" the logical sense of the narrator.
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Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much, Big Sister. Yes, sea holly is from the same family as teasel plants. It's always good to hear from you. May you have a great evening.
love ya,
MariVal
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