Kayla
A girls name, meaning wisdom.34 total reviews
Comment from Ben Colder
Good heart. That always creates wisdom. It is the place that God looks upon and dwells. My best to you in the contest. I see nothing wrong. The photo blends well.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Good heart. That always creates wisdom. It is the place that God looks upon and dwells. My best to you in the contest. I see nothing wrong. The photo blends well.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for the understand review and ,of course, for the six stars.
Beth
Comment from Sally Law
Ah, so sweet. What a tender spirit in Kayla. My Sophia is the same. Beautifully written and illustrated in short verse poetry. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Ah, so sweet. What a tender spirit in Kayla. My Sophia is the same. Beautifully written and illustrated in short verse poetry. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Sally. I appreciate the review and you lovely comments.
Beth
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Even as I age, I act the same when I see life's gone from a once vibrant frame, and yet with people, it's not the same ... usually for I know they who passed will be without pain life brought to them.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Even as I age, I act the same when I see life's gone from a once vibrant frame, and yet with people, it's not the same ... usually for I know they who passed will be without pain life brought to them.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Thanks for the reviews. I appreciate you sharing your thoughts in poetry.
Beth
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Here is a young girl with a big heart and love of Nature and all nature's creatures. I like the way you have used this name to create a lovely poem. Well done Beth. Good luck in the contest. Cheers
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Here is a young girl with a big heart and love of Nature and all nature's creatures. I like the way you have used this name to create a lovely poem. Well done Beth. Good luck in the contest. Cheers
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Thank you Pearl. I really appreciate the review and you thoughts.
Beth
Comment from lyenochka
What a great portrait you created in this cinquain form. Even though Kayla knows the life cycles of nature (wise beyond her years), yet her compassionate heart is still moved by even the smallest creature's death. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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What a great portrait you created in this cinquain form. Even though Kayla knows the life cycles of nature (wise beyond her years), yet her compassionate heart is still moved by even the smallest creature's death. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 09-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Helen. I hardly ever write and unrhymed poem so I glad you think it works. I appreciate your understanding comments.
Beth
Comment from JT traveller
You can be wise and sympathetic at the same time, always a good combination. I enjoyed the way you woven the meaning of the child's name into your poem. Very clever. Jacqueline
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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You can be wise and sympathetic at the same time, always a good combination. I enjoyed the way you woven the meaning of the child's name into your poem. Very clever. Jacqueline
Comment Written 09-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Than you, Jacqueline. I appreciate you review and nice comments.
Beth
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*have woven, apologies for the typo. Have a great evening 😊
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry into the Cinquain contest. The text is a great size.
The message is clearly stated and easy to understand. I would probably substitute the word "YES" for YET because it would show even more so her empathy and understanding of how nature too may be hard/cruel. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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This is a good entry into the Cinquain contest. The text is a great size.
The message is clearly stated and easy to understand. I would probably substitute the word "YES" for YET because it would show even more so her empathy and understanding of how nature too may be hard/cruel. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Thank you for a great review. I enjoyed reading your comments and suggestions.
Beth
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You are welcome.
Comment from Ric Myworld
A poor little dead bird can almost breath anyone's heart if we stop to think about. A life drained too soon, never to live again. Well, unless there is a bird Heaven. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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A poor little dead bird can almost breath anyone's heart if we stop to think about. A life drained too soon, never to live again. Well, unless there is a bird Heaven. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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Thank you Ric. The story probably wouldn't be much with the sad picture. I needed all the help I could get.
Beth
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Sweet innocence of youth captured in your words and picture. Love the alliteration you have thrown in to tie it all together.
A lovely read, Beth.
Pam
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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Sweet innocence of youth captured in your words and picture. Love the alliteration you have thrown in to tie it all together.
A lovely read, Beth.
Pam
Comment Written 09-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Pam. I appreciate your kind words. I'm so glad you like it.
Beth
Comment from Bill Schott
This cinquain, Kayla, has the proper formatting and finds that even the most in-tune soul will have to admit that the cycle of life leads back to death. Sad.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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This cinquain, Kayla, has the proper formatting and finds that even the most in-tune soul will have to admit that the cycle of life leads back to death. Sad.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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Thank you Bill, I appreciate the review and comments on my cinquain. I was the kind little girl that cried of dead birds, but I didn't want to deal with death.
Beth