Dribbles And Drabbles
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Beddy-Bye"A Collection Of Mini Stories
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Comment from T B Botts
Hello Brett,
I have to give you a six for this one. This was so original. What's wrong with that little dweeb of a kid though? If he knew the monster only ate big people, why call in his mom? Now who's going to cook him breakfast?
Well done buddy.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Hello Brett,
I have to give you a six for this one. This was so original. What's wrong with that little dweeb of a kid though? If he knew the monster only ate big people, why call in his mom? Now who's going to cook him breakfast?
Well done buddy.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Glad you enjoyed this farce. Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from GWHARGIS
Well, this one got my attention. I wasn't expecting that ending at all. Great story, written in a concise style with enough to have the scare factor. Using the word yanked gave it the impact that moment needed. Great flash horror fiction. Gretchen
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Well, this one got my attention. I wasn't expecting that ending at all. Great story, written in a concise style with enough to have the scare factor. Using the word yanked gave it the impact that moment needed. Great flash horror fiction. Gretchen
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Appreciate your insights and the review.
Comment from Ulla
Oh dear, Brett, what can I say? This is one scary story and will be any child's nightmare. I didn't quite see this coming. It's a great entry. All best of luck, Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Oh dear, Brett, what can I say? This is one scary story and will be any child's nightmare. I didn't quite see this coming. It's a great entry. All best of luck, Ulla:)))
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Much appreciate your insights and the review.
Comment from royowen
Ah, a great twist in your story, the thoughts that tend to dwell in the minds of little ones is that monsters are devourers of children, but this is a toss up for that theory, beautifully wrtten Brett, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Ah, a great twist in your story, the thoughts that tend to dwell in the minds of little ones is that monsters are devourers of children, but this is a toss up for that theory, beautifully wrtten Brett, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Much appreciated. So is the review.
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Welcome
Comment from Bill Schott
This dribble, Beddy Bye, has the proper word count and finds that those night terrors are not limited to kids and are sometimes not entirely in one's mind.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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This dribble, Beddy Bye, has the proper word count and finds that those night terrors are not limited to kids and are sometimes not entirely in one's mind.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Much appreciate the review and your comments.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Yes, sir, I think all of us worried about the monster in the closet or under the bed for a part of our lives, and it would be a relief to learn the monster only eats adults, if I hadn't become one. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Yes, sir, I think all of us worried about the monster in the closet or under the bed for a part of our lives, and it would be a relief to learn the monster only eats adults, if I hadn't become one. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Ever feel like you were on the menu? You know, monsters do come in more than one form. Always appreciate your comments and reviews.
Comment from eliz100
I enjoyed reading this flash fiction. You met the criteria for a complete story: beginning, middle, and end. Poor Mom and traumatized child, there really is a monster under the bed. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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I enjoyed reading this flash fiction. You met the criteria for a complete story: beginning, middle, and end. Poor Mom and traumatized child, there really is a monster under the bed. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Much appreciate the review.
Comment from Shirley McLain
You should always believe a child, because they don't lie. You did an excellent job with this flash fiction. Have a wonderful day and good luck in the contest. Shirley
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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You should always believe a child, because they don't lie. You did an excellent job with this flash fiction. Have a wonderful day and good luck in the contest. Shirley
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Much appreciate the review.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Adult eating monsters. Not a good thing. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading. You told the story and used only a few words. That always impresses me. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Adult eating monsters. Not a good thing. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading. You told the story and used only a few words. That always impresses me. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Thanks. Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
This was a fun little horror story. Proving that its possible to tell an effective scary story in a few brief sentences. Yes, I do enjoy 2 sentence horror as well.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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This was a fun little horror story. Proving that its possible to tell an effective scary story in a few brief sentences. Yes, I do enjoy 2 sentence horror as well.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate the review.