One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sweet and endearing write about this special flower that is sometimes ignored. I think evening primrose is a delightful flower, I enjoyed your unusual approach in this clever poem, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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This is a sweet and endearing write about this special flower that is sometimes ignored. I think evening primrose is a delightful flower, I enjoyed your unusual approach in this clever poem, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Dolly,
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Ricky1024
Reality captured in a by but a simple but pleasing thought.
A Flower whom lights and cleats a path.
A Path if ye, so wish to follow?
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Rich in theme and imagery, this also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Reality captured in a by but a simple but pleasing thought.
A Flower whom lights and cleats a path.
A Path if ye, so wish to follow?
...
Rich in theme and imagery, this also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 25-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Dr Ricky
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Gypsy.. This is a rather gorgeous Sijo poem with a lovely sentiment included in your words ( as usual always thoughtful and nice to read) What a pretty flower
Cheers Chris
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Hi Gypsy.. This is a rather gorgeous Sijo poem with a lovely sentiment included in your words ( as usual always thoughtful and nice to read) What a pretty flower
Cheers Chris
Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Chris,
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Have a great weekend!
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
I know from whence this poem comes from, and you're tight, when God took a step back, he realised (not that He needs awakening) he knew anyway, but that is reassuring to us, that we are loved, great language here Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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I know from whence this poem comes from, and you're tight, when God took a step back, he realised (not that He needs awakening) he knew anyway, but that is reassuring to us, that we are loved, great language here Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Have a great weekend!
Gypsy hugs
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Well done
Comment from JT traveller
Great message Gypsy, beauty is in the eye of the beholder and looks are only skin deep.
A well thought out poem that was romantic and sentimental. We can see many things of beauty all around us that others miss or take for granted.
A pleasant reminder and another eloquently written poem.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Great message Gypsy, beauty is in the eye of the beholder and looks are only skin deep.
A well thought out poem that was romantic and sentimental. We can see many things of beauty all around us that others miss or take for granted.
A pleasant reminder and another eloquently written poem.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Have a great weekend!
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mintybee
This is a gorgeous poem. I love how the flower is personified. I appreciate the quiet dignity and tender love shown here. I've always liked primroses. They don't look like much in the daytime, but I was so excited when I first saw them bloom when I was a child. I actually put that experience in a story I got published recently. That's not really related to your poem, except that I was very sad that the flower felt ignored, and very happy when Someone noticed her, because it tugged my nostalgic heartstrings a little. I found the poem very relatable, as a lover of primroses, and as somewhat of a wall flower myself.
Mintybee
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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This is a gorgeous poem. I love how the flower is personified. I appreciate the quiet dignity and tender love shown here. I've always liked primroses. They don't look like much in the daytime, but I was so excited when I first saw them bloom when I was a child. I actually put that experience in a story I got published recently. That's not really related to your poem, except that I was very sad that the flower felt ignored, and very happy when Someone noticed her, because it tugged my nostalgic heartstrings a little. I found the poem very relatable, as a lover of primroses, and as somewhat of a wall flower myself.
Mintybee
Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Hello, Minty, it's personal for me too. I often feel unattractive and it's sad. But it's not always that way. I am happy that you like it. I am grateful for the exceptional six stars review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend!
gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
I enjoyed this poem. I liked the imagery of God fiddling with the unassuming flower. Hi am not familiar with the plant itself but I do know that Evening Primrose is a wonderful homeopathic treatment for menopause. Beautifully written and sweet. Gretchen
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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I enjoyed this poem. I liked the imagery of God fiddling with the unassuming flower. Hi am not familiar with the plant itself but I do know that Evening Primrose is a wonderful homeopathic treatment for menopause. Beautifully written and sweet. Gretchen
Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Yes, it's actually a pretty flower I just went with the name... common, it's just for the poem. Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful weekend.
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Comment from aryr
This was a wonderful Sijo Poem, Gypsy. I am pleased that you chose the color of the evening prime rose. I am also pleased that you wrote the words of the poem because they were so comforting. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed be n hugs!!!
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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This was a wonderful Sijo Poem, Gypsy. I am pleased that you chose the color of the evening prime rose. I am also pleased that you wrote the words of the poem because they were so comforting. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed be n hugs!!!
Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much, Aryr. I appreciate that you took the time to review my poem :) Have a wonderful weekend. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
Love your sijo and its spiritual meaning. Not only does God care for this plain but very useful plant, the Evening Primrose, God cares for all of us and knows our worth in Him!
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Love your sijo and its spiritual meaning. Not only does God care for this plain but very useful plant, the Evening Primrose, God cares for all of us and knows our worth in Him!
Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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I am happy you like it. I wrote it in your honor. Thank you, big sister.
love,
marival
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💖💖Thank you!!
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You are welcome (*8*)
Comment from Regina Elliott
So sorry, I'm out of 6 stars.
This is a heavenly write and
you are so talented at
different forms of poetry.
Have a wondrous weekend full of serenity. Blessings ~
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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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So sorry, I'm out of 6 stars.
This is a heavenly write and
you are so talented at
different forms of poetry.
Have a wondrous weekend full of serenity. Blessings ~
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much, Regina. Your kind words are worth a lot to me, more that sixes. Have a wonderful weekend.
gypsy hugs