Tanka Collection
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Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello, Gypsy!
Oh my goodness!
How creative and imaginative!
While your photograph/artwork adds to your excellent offering, the essence of your Tanka speaks loud and clear, and I smiled when I arrived at its conclusion. So..."the sun fails to play it cool," eh? Brilliant.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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Hello, Gypsy!
Oh my goodness!
How creative and imaginative!
While your photograph/artwork adds to your excellent offering, the essence of your Tanka speaks loud and clear, and I smiled when I arrived at its conclusion. So..."the sun fails to play it cool," eh? Brilliant.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 22-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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Diane,
Thanks you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
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My pleasure!
diane
Comment from lyenochka
I liked the "crowned in technicolor blooms" and "sprinkled in dew" (maybe "with dew" ? not sure) but that pivots nicely to the reaching up to the sun who "tries to play it cool." Great use of personification!
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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I liked the "crowned in technicolor blooms" and "sprinkled in dew" (maybe "with dew" ? not sure) but that pivots nicely to the reaching up to the sun who "tries to play it cool." Great use of personification!
Comment Written 22-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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Thank you, big sister. I fixed it.
Love ya
Marival ❤️
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your modern Tanka- excellent picture presentation and flow - painting a fluffy picture - lighthearted nymph - poem with a rhyme quality very nice- fails to play it cool- cute Good Job AP
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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I like your modern Tanka- excellent picture presentation and flow - painting a fluffy picture - lighthearted nymph - poem with a rhyme quality very nice- fails to play it cool- cute Good Job AP
Comment Written 22-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from INtity
Crowned in technicolor blooms--I like that line. Nice little poem. It has a good image of the spring nymph. Fails to play it cool? Does that mean she isn't cool like the weather or means she stirs up a storm in a way. Just curious.
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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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Crowned in technicolor blooms--I like that line. Nice little poem. It has a good image of the spring nymph. Fails to play it cool? Does that mean she isn't cool like the weather or means she stirs up a storm in a way. Just curious.
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Comment Written 22-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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The sun is hot so trying to play it 'cool' is the twist or satori
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
A spring nymph of lakes, springs, rivers and fountains submerged from an aquatic plant having narrow leaves and small flowers. Could there be a tree that looks like a Greek goddess?
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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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A spring nymph of lakes, springs, rivers and fountains submerged from an aquatic plant having narrow leaves and small flowers. Could there be a tree that looks like a Greek goddess?
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Comment Written 22-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy