Closure
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Comment from patcelaw
You did a very good job of using all of the words in the poem. The poem flows well it rhymes well, but it is such a sad story and it's telling. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Patricia.
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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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You did a very good job of using all of the words in the poem. The poem flows well it rhymes well, but it is such a sad story and it's telling. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Patricia.
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Comment Written 15-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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Thanks so much for reading my poem and for this great review.
Comment from JT traveller
Such power in your words. An extremely complex piece of writing. Emotive, evocative, tense while incorporating the necessary words.
A wonderful poem and a strong competitor for the win. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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Such power in your words. An extremely complex piece of writing. Emotive, evocative, tense while incorporating the necessary words.
A wonderful poem and a strong competitor for the win. Best of luck.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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Thank you for this exceptional review and for your kind words about my poem. :)