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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The sunflower is definitely a heavy flower when it ripens with seeds. We have several fields of the yellow sunflower. The seeds bring happiness to a lot of young people. They eat the seeds for a snack. Like your poem.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2023
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The sunflower is definitely a heavy flower when it ripens with seeds. We have several fields of the yellow sunflower. The seeds bring happiness to a lot of young people. They eat the seeds for a snack. Like your poem.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Sunflower eyes see the and sense the sun and soak up its rays and worship with such loyalty, I enjoyed your few words of great devotion here, a fine tanka, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2023
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Sunflower eyes see the and sense the sun and soak up its rays and worship with such loyalty, I enjoyed your few words of great devotion here, a fine tanka, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Have a wonderful weekend. Love.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from patcelaw
Your work is always so well written, and your presentations are real works of art. Haiku can be so varied that it can challenge the poetry writer. May you have a blessed weekend.
Patricia
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2023
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Your work is always so well written, and your presentations are real works of art. Haiku can be so varied that it can challenge the poetry writer. May you have a blessed weekend.
Patricia
Comment Written 10-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your lovely review. Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment from JT traveller
Another beautiful poem.
Such a great and erotic line,
"soaking sultry sunshine --
the sunflower..."
Have a wonderful day and thank you for sharing your thoughts once again.
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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2023
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Another beautiful poem.
Such a great and erotic line,
"soaking sultry sunshine --
the sunflower..."
Have a wonderful day and thank you for sharing your thoughts once again.
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Comment Written 10-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your lovely review. Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
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😊🙏
Comment from royowen
You wouldn't believe it, but I wrote about exactly this just a short time ago. Reflecting on that magic time when dreams floated in the clouds and permeate that newly born creative thought. Beautifully written Gypsy, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2023
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You wouldn't believe it, but I wrote about exactly this just a short time ago. Reflecting on that magic time when dreams floated in the clouds and permeate that newly born creative thought. Beautifully written Gypsy, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 10-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much, Roy, I appreciate your exceptional review.
I believe you wrote a similar poem... great minds.... hehehe that happens to me sometimes. Have a wonderful weekend, my friend.
Gypsy hugs
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You too Gypsy